uppin this battle y'all............thanx to those who voted...as u can see i kept my end of the bargain N returned the fav.....uppin 4 mo cats to do tha same.........

uppin 4 tha win............i been returnin the fav to mad battlers........c'mon..... ^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

It was aiight battle but my vote goes to 730 cuz i was feelin his shyt a lil bit more....good battle though............

730 takes this with the better format, for sure...

And he utilized some sweet wordplay in those punches.

Nice work.

Dan was a bit stretched.
Really didn't use wordplay or metas...
(cept for that "ruins" line, nice...
if you'd have done that more, this would be close as shit)

Just a bit outclassed was Dan...

But good shit, Dan...

You'll improve!

Peace

^^^^^^thanx alot y'all............i'm uppin 4 tha closer quick.....this shoulda actually be a k.o but he had to get rode............lmao....

well it was a good try by Dan. He had an oright verse structure was fucked some punches were oright. 730 on the other hand came a lot better and his punches were felt more. So my vote goes to him

plz return a honest fev
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