damn 2 more votes in this bitch............................................. .................................................. ........

damn vote niggas... the votes are 3 to 0 .................................................. .....lets hurry up and wrap this battle up

dude, I'll just straight up SMASH YOUR CHIN and leave you with FRACTURED LIMBS,
SLASH YOUR SKIN, then dump you off in a hole smaller than the one sadamm got CAPTURED IN
cuz every diss that your LACIN RUDLY sends extra volts of hate RACIN THROUGH ME
so im a just scar your FACE AND TRUELY
commit more murders scenes aganist your family than JASON MOVIES
your lyrical ROUTES BAD and your getting labeled with a "SLOUCH" TAG
in this battle theres no DOUBT THAT, this verse that i send through my MOUSE PAD
will leave your MOUTH GAGGED
you must have "skipped class" during this battle cuz you've been literaly "OUTCLASSED"

structures kinda fucked leave the caps out people can tell what ryhmes and the multis and shit i give a 16/20



This guys a smiley face, and I'm a rhyming entity
Disability? Nah, that's called Authenticity,
When you rhyme, your style fills a quarter of my capacity,
When you walk away, everyone will see the crack-of-your-ass-shitty,
What were you thinking, when you you "copied that Rhyme"
I wrote that 3 years ago in my career, the "height of mine",
So you better "start to mine", cuz this shit just about to "dart a line",
mix those rhymes with 8 parts o' water and a "part of brine",
you still cant win, even if you "start to shine"
Allright, so mr. smiley face, get "sprayed with mace",
Im just "like jase"(jason), im a killer you cant "seem to face",
when you "try to race", you get beaten like i flew "like aerospace"
You got hacked like a "computer database",
And I AM sadam hiding in your "closest marketplace",
waiting to stab you and end up with a "scarface",
So just walk away, and you wont have as much disgrace
Losses are now commonplace , with mr. smiley face

not feeling this verse as much had some weird played lines don't seperate words with - -- -- shit like that .....you had weak punches i only felt like one ...don't worry so much about multis..12/20....

hit these up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105864
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105893

aiight cool ill hit your battles up later.. im bout to bounce.. but 1 more vote.. yall.. so i can ko this dude...............................

aight yo i think that smiley wins this because his punches hit harder were better and were more consistent

he had the better overall verse and better everything

ok battle but smiley wins