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vote - As
took this easily, better punches and better wordplay overall...his verse was better worded, but his structure is the only thing lacking...fixed that up.. 1ne. |
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aight then im out for he nite, one,.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................
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Aigh sic ama add 4 lines to my original verse
here it goes: 0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/ You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/ Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/ I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/ Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!.... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/sickwitmusic.htm (his Audio site...sounds weak as fucc..lol (added 4 lines) I'm wreckin ya hate, no need for argument Sic called this debate/ I run time without freight! like bombers with no wings, you never gonig to elevate!/ Can't feel me? Aes just left the debris, you should of said no to the callout cause my punches only getting worse!// Truth be told yo avy is way better than your whole verse!!!/..lol done deal............. |
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ayo dont need to break it down Aesthetic got this he had hardher hitting punches and had better flow and good structure...................
my vote-Aesthetic hit up my battle and return the favor......................thanx..............~*1* ~ |
shit heres the link sorry bout that................thanx.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109269 |
Punches: Neither
Multis: As Wordplay: Neither Flow: As Opener: As Closer: As Both of you need punches and wordplay, i don't thikn I saw one in there. As had a more polished verse, hot multis. Sick's verse was all around weak. Vote - Aesthetic You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/ Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/ Best bar of the battle Could you return the favor, in my signature |
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0-2 ??..lol Yo Clown! Fuck-Punches Imma Just Eat You Like Cut-Lunches!/ Cause The Only Time This Kids Shit Gets Felt Is When He's Gettin His Butt-Punctured!/
Nice Punch..Funny You Gonna Stop Me Dip-Shit? When You Spittin Wit Clit-Lips!/ Only Time You Ever Get Noticed Is On The Blade Rockin Pink Dressed N Lip-Stick!/ ..The Weaker Of The 3 Bars I Spit Fire! R.I.P This Fool! Cause Of Death? .. Burn-Related!/ Jokin Me Right? Ya Style on Tha Mic is Like A Slip Knot! One Pull N You Terminated!.... The Best Of Your Lines....Original As Wins By Far....Punches Hit..But You're Structure Needs Working On....Even Though I Battle Like That..People Say Bars Are Too Long... :confused:..I Like It Though... Good Battle. Vote = As |
ightt Aesthetic came good but could have been beter..........
flow:Aesthetic wordplay:nethier structure:Aesthetic punches:Aesthetic over all my vote gos to Aesthetic </ Aesthetic |
oh shit 4 got to pole vote..........and hit this up and return the favor.thanx....*1*...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109825 |
Thnx all ya'll 1 more and this will be closed
uppun............................................. . |
This Was A Nice Battle But Aes Took It Easily With Punches,Personals/Disses,Vocab,Wordplay, Etc.............
Vote=Aes REturn Da Favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109945 |
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