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put returns in ur full stops man lol!!!

it fuks the page width up if you dont...

.............................. thanks neway man

freeman took this a bit 1 sided punches hit alot harder flow was aight disses were better and wordplay was good...iceman i didnt get ur start and ur punches didnt land as hard...keep at it and u will elevate in time...........

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iight...

thanks for all the votes...

uppin this #2

thank you...

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laterz

those were aight lyrics waged in that battle, servin ur lines and flow need improvement although u stepped it up at the end, but then fell right back off at the closer, free i can tell ur a vet, not ur best work, but pieced together nice enough to get by.


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yo ite my mAN FREE merked this shit nice verse man,

good flow also tite structure and ur punches hit unlike the other dude.simple......pz