set up nicely
probably the deepest piece ive seen from you
expressed your emotion in a short but interesting and thought provoking way
liked the imagery you used

'cheaters way out -showered my thoughts but I'm no coward
Ill clutch the stem until my hands bleed and then eat the flower
slowly release rage through words on a tear soaken paper
and blind the guide who took the broken path he called safer
so I stand here now looking up, broken but stronger
and release a silent scream at love saying my hope is no longer
^all standout
loved the eating the flower..really dope image right there
props

short but commendable. the flow was apparent. the meaning was felt and the
topic was nice. i felt this one and it seemed as if i could somehow relate to
wut ur saying. some lines were a bit perplexing but it was an enjoyable read.
keep at it.

hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109

pz

very good imagry

i see you are using more flow and multies

props

it reminds me of something i would write

good job it was an enjoyable but short read