I was ready to start bashing this piece for using a played idea... but when i read it, that wasnt possible... you had a decent use of multis, but your vocabulary and flow were very good... i liked the way you used real truth (facts, statistics) to convey the story... excellent job... the only thing you need to improve on is your multi-syllabic rhyming... you need to incorporate some of it into your pieces, but otherwise top stuff.... 8/10

i think all you fools is taking the wrong drugs.anyway,if drugs were legal,would anyone waste the time hearing drug rhymes?Dont ask or you just might get it!

this was alright i think it had nice flow but it could be elevate a bit more...ya structure needs work but is still pretty good...i liked the topic and ya didnt really play it out which was good....so all and all this was a good Open Mic Read keep em droping....PeacE....