This was a really dope piece Mr.S...
I loved how you brought out the imagry..
Great flow..
These last 5 lines just caught me..
"i can envision the feelings it will create as hopeless
just like the snowless christmas i never celebrated
plus the new year came belated as demonstrated
filled with hatred in-complacent, the life we live in
class ends in two minutes, so go ahead and finish it"
Props for the whole piece..
Check this piece out please..I think I put a little something about you in it..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106609

Like Maven said before, You incorporated alot more multies than in alot of previous pieces. Personally, I saw this as a beautiful piece laced with many many metaphors and great flow. I can't ask more from a better piece. This seemed a little bit ehh, like it was more thrown together rather than taking the time to perfect it. But it was still a good piece nonetheless.

for sure, up?