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Brethan got this shit..decent battle between the both of you..Bret got this with better punches..wordplayed..like the implied..and punches..Danksta verse was average..well..a little below average..the dashes was gay..and that ren from michigan..was.umm..well..it didint make sense..and thats how your whole verse was...both of you elevate..
my vote/brethren http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...215#post1106215 ^^hit it up^^ |
ayo close battle! really really close! i was expectin more na'sayin? but i'ma have to vote for Brethren . . his punches hit hella harder.. dope shit! i can't vote yet . . my bad fellaz! easy!
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dan got this but a littel stronger punches better structuer,better flow..
my vote-DANN |
danksta - wack structure..........flow fell off due to ya structure........vocab was ok........some of the multis were pretty tight.........wordplay could have been better, but still aight........opener sucked........closer was ok.......i was feelin some of ya punches.........no real good personals.......
brethen - pretty good structure........flow was ok........vocab was pretty tight..........i was feelin most of ya multis.......wordplay was pretty ill.........ya opener was nice.......closer was ok..........most of ya punches hit hard........good personals...... conclusion - brethen takes this in wordplay, better opener, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote.... VOTE - BRETHEN yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108159 much appreciated.......... |
whoaaa.......very one sided
brethen takez it in every category........ punches: b...hit harder.... flow: b...smoother....n eazier 2 follow...... structure:......none vote: brethen good battle props 2 both hit dis battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699 |
flow - brethen
metaphors - brethen wordplay - danksta personals - danksta overall - brethen close battle. nice work both. plz vote on thiz one: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623 |
Good battle..
Danksta.. structure was flawed.. stretched lines messed the flow up at times.. some good similies/metas whateva.. a few nice punches.. the main thing it lacked was consistancy.. a good punch stood out amongst many weak ones really.. Tho a pretty good verse overall... Brethan.. same style, altho slightly better flow/structure.. more creative punches really, and it was kept pretty consistant throughout the whole verse... good use of wordplay etc.. Close battle.. but for the consistancy and originality.. Vote - Brethan |
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