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Punches-Avenge
Flow-Telekentic Multi-Both Meta-Both Structure-Telkenetic Personals-Telekentic Opener-Telekenetic Closer-Avenge Overal-Telekenetic This was a very close battle, the only reason Tele won is because he edged out Avenge in some categories. Avenge you are really good dude, get a better structure and you got it. |
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I liked Avenge's verse more...less played material and it was creative and he did have some great wordplay in there.
"Avenge Know To Open-Spits… Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips " One hell of an opener. Tele did post an ok verse, but nothing really stood out. It was jsut basically a standard diss, not much creativity which is why he couldn't really make me laugh. Tele jsut presented the facts, Avenge added a creative twist to it. Tele did have a better structure and flow...but those don't decide battles...punchlines do, which is why I vote Avenge. Decent battle tho. Just be more creative Tele. Vote- Avenge Now you said I if I dropped a link, you'd vote on my battle. So please vote on one of the battels in my signature please. Thank you. |
umm dis was ahott battle...be4 i break dis shit down i would like 2 say dis is fuckin text battlin on da net how can u fuckin flow serious everybody shit is different..aneway...let me break dis shit down
opener-tele punches-avenge..took dis 1 real easy creativity-a tie wordplay-avenge personals-tele my vote-tele his shit wa smore personal and datz whut u need a battle along with da punches....avenge ya shit was sick dunn but hegot dis shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107960 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107533 ^^^^there go da links my battles rite...can ya niggaz vote on wun or both since i did ya'll a favor and voted on ya shit ..goodlookin WUN! |
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damn probablly the iilest battle ive ever read on this board.. ill be back to break this one down.. just uppin it for now though
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avenges verse
Avenge Know To Open-Spits… Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips hahaha nice multies and punchline Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious… If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You nice creative line You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’ Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed… You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food damn yo that mathmatic equations line had a nigga rolling hot shit To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food damn nice battle you had some hot punchlines some clever lines and a nice use of multies i give this verse a 8.5/10 telekenetics verse Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop nice personal disses with the first 2 lines.. the last punchline was decent too Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto? Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo i wasnt really feeling the last 2 lines of this shit.. plus some of the punchlines here didnt hit that hard he pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped overall nice verse i give this verse a 7.5/10 overall vote: i got to give my vote to avenge here.. he had more clever lines and i was feeling alot more of his punchlines |
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YO I CANT POLL...BUT SHIT...AVENGE TOOK THIS ONE...BUT BARELEY.......BOTH HAD SOEM RAW ASS PUNCHES BUT...AVENGES HIT HARDER.....
VOTE---AVENGE I LEFT SOME HONEST VOTE...DO THE SAME FOR ME http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=jAY-nOVA http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=jAY-nOVA |
Sombody end this shit I want to battle again........
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