I really liked this piece. I agree with Filed on why others might not really understand and feel the emotion in this piece. And i also think abstract and mysterious pieces are sometimes among the best. I personally like something that makes me think, something brought in a way not many bring it. But anywho.....
This piece was nice. The vocab, flow, structure, was right. I felt the concept, the thought behind this piece is.... really good (kind of lost for words). But this was a nice read, keep writing hun.

thanks a lot girl, thanks for really taking the time to read this shit. much respect for being able to see the emotion and the meaning. still uppin i guess.