commmmmmmon uppin

hey that woz real nice, its a hard hitin peice, the flow worked well all the way through the vocab was good. nice peice dawg

7/10

can ya do me a favour now, go vote on this battle, it only needs 1 more vote and i cant up anymore. cheers.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108416

rule your flow was exelent, very tight piece, you both complimented eachothers peices

overall 8/10

commmmmmmmmmmmmmon uppin

Emotion. . You Had A Consistent Flow, I Was Definately Feeling Your Verse. . Content Was Dead On With The Topic. . Multi's Were Good, Vocab Was Good. . Only Thing That Bugged Me Was Some Lines Were Extended And It Knocked The Consistency Of The Flow That I Talked About. . But I Picked It Up And Everything Is All Good. . I Didn't Like The Idiocy Line, Just Seemed Filler And Didn't Rhyme With Anything Besides Stupidity, You COuld've Carried It One And Elaborated Into Another Line Overall Though, Real Nice Verse. . Quotable :

Wispered Conversations between Me and my alter ego
Pondering on the true meaning of life and watching it grow
Beliveing and conceiving what my conscience tells me is right
Wondering how I started this fight,My Brain turns off like a light
^ ^ Really nice start, Suggestion : Type Ya Verse In Word Pad Or Something And Use Spell Check, Some Words Were Misspelled. . Just A Tip.

Rule. . Your Verse Started Out A Little Rocky, Opener Was Pretty Good. . The First Two Lines Of It. . The NExt Two Didn't Even Rhyme, Ya Have To Watch Out For That. . Your Flow, Just Like Emotion's, Was Consistent. . I Judge PIeces On Flow, So You Get Extra Points. . Vocab Was Real Nice And I Like The Multi's In This. . Made Your Flow More Crisi And Edge Emotion's Verse. . Overall, Your Verse Hit The Content More Deeper And Better Than Emotion's. . Therefore, I'm Feeling Your Verse More Than His, But You Both Did A Good Job. Quotable :

But if I just sit and listen to the souls in my bones
I may recieve answers for my destiny in unique tones
^ ^ Dope, Real Deep, Feeling It.

As A Whole, You Two Complimented Each Other Very Well, I'll Be Looking For Individual Drops From Each Of You As Well As Another Collab. Pz.

Ok, I Spent Alot Of Time On This Reply. . So Can I Get A Decent One In Return ? Check Out - Doper Than Thou - , It's Up Now. . And If You're Feelin That, Then Drop Feed To - Make It - Which Will Be Up Later Today. . Thanks. Might As Well Let This Shit Ride To 2000 Characters. . . 2053 To Be Exact.

Will Hit Both pieces Up Shortly

comeone upps

upps