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-   -   Sp1TGa1M vs. MichaelMadness (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=107862)

~RaPiDfIrE~ 01-19-04 12:19 AM

Michael Madness...I see potential in your shit..for once...I see someone that had a couple of lines that made me crack a smile....you got decent rhymes, and it seems like ur grasping the concept of wordplay....you need to fix your flow tho..at some parts it was smooth but then at some parts it was just plain horrible....your structure was kinda bad too....but other than that u had a good verse overall...

Sp1tGa1m...u had decent rhymes..but no multis...no real punches either...I didn't get the thing about 2 dads that both like kittens....I thought all straight guys like kittens...lmao..vocab was weak....your flow was on point tho....nothing special about ur verse tho...needs some work but it wasn't horrible...besides the fact that you played off his verse the entire time...

vote- Michael Madness..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107780

^ battle needs some votes....I'd appreciate it if u'd return the favor...(not meaning I want u to vote for me..just saying vote on the battle lol)

peace

MichaelMadness 01-19-04 11:42 AM

Uppin ....need 2 more and this is done......Post a vote and I'll hit you back

SyaNidal 01-19-04 11:58 AM

weak ass battle but im giving it to mike mad
becauz spit gaim fed off his verse for one...
and spit had virtually no punches...
madness had better punches(well had some)
and thats what tooke this battle nothing great here though...
My VOte-Mike Mad yall return the favor wit honest votes on battles in my sig... ThaNx...
_-SyaNidal-_

MichaelMadness 01-19-04 12:59 PM

uppin Need 1 more vote...cmon some body vote n leave yer thread I'll hit yer battle up

Telekinetic 01-19-04 01:31 PM

Mike- Your verse was desent. You had some pretty funny punches an personals. The opener was a good personal.

Spit- Your 12 an it showed really. Your verse was just really simple. An dont ever use kittens in a verse again. lol You never had any real creative punches or anything. Desent for 12 I guess.

OVERALL- Mike more creative an harder punches
return the favor with a fair vote on one of these battles
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107516
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
Thanks


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