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Word Definate 01-18-04 11:46 PM

goin with Atl....harder punches...nice flow...last line was a killa...i think ive heard that andre shit b4 too....but Atl got my vote

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kuntryboi 01-19-04 12:43 AM

atl- you had harder punches and shit and you flowed better to me folk....
bonu- ya names gay enough but damn ya rhymes was doo doo garbage shawt

yo atl? what part of atlanta you stay at nigga? since i voted on this shit yall go srop a poll vote on my battle against wise ways, its on this page..............

AJ 01-19-04 12:23 PM

Opener-ATL
Closer-ATL
Multi-Bonu
Flow-ATL
Punches-ATL
Meta-None
Structure-Both

Overal-ATL

Yeah, ATL pretty muhc kicked this kids ass. Bonu you have way to sort of lines, don't use the / either, they are noobish, elevate, look at some of the vets battles and take notes.

~Yo What Up~ 01-19-04 12:59 PM

bonu - structure is good, flow is ok, rhyme scheme is wack, most of the punches suck, no personals, no multis, basic wordplay

atl - structure is good, flow is pretty good, rhyme scheme is ok, some of the punches r pretty good, personals r ok, ok multis, pretty good wordplay

conclusion - atl takes this in rhyme scheme, punches, personals, and wordplay, so he gets my vote

VOTE - ATL SHAWTY

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u did the same.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947

much appreciated.........


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