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-   -   Dizzy Hommel 'vs' Code-187 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=108195)

yungthug619 01-23-04 01:34 AM

Code 187 Got This

Code, You Had Better Punches, Good Structure,
Aight Flow, That Line Bout His Crew, And Him
Gettin Merked Was Dope.

Dizzy, You Need To Elevate Alot, You Had Horrible
Punches, No Structure At All, Sorry Ass Flow, You
Need To Work On Everything Dawg.

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yungthug619 01-23-04 01:47 AM

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Token 01-23-04 10:50 AM

All bad votes were removed. Poll is 0-0

Code should be up 2-0.
-Axe

Token 01-23-04 06:06 PM

^ No... other votes were unexplained.

And the guy on this page didn't have 200 posts.

Poll should be at 0-0, AXE!

code-187 01-25-04 12:18 PM

uppin 1
come on people drop some votes, and leave battle links

code-187 01-25-04 12:20 PM

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uppin 1
come on people drop some votes and leave battle links, ill get back atcha

dizzy hommel 01-25-04 12:59 PM

yesterday ihad won this battle bcus Code-187 was Spammin so y has it re-opend?!

FanTa ZeE 01-25-04 01:00 PM

Code won this, his lines were basically the same length and his verse flowed better than Dizzys, neither had quotable vocab but i liked the line

'they might sound good in your head; but they don't as verbals'

vote : code

MC-WATTO 01-25-04 02:13 PM

Not a bad little battle goin down eya, i think 187 myte jus take this 1 because his punch lines are much beta. but a good effort dizee

VennyRhymes 01-25-04 02:17 PM

Gd battle. Evenly matched but i think code 187 takes it
Why? = Harder hittin punch lines and it seemed to flow better

rule 01-25-04 03:54 PM

This was a weak battle...you both need to try and elavate

Code..you had a okie verse.should of maybe re-worded some of your lines to make them stronger..try and get some personals..be creative..it helps a lot

but anyways your verse was okie..started off alright but went kinda sloppy...try use the 1 2 1 2 rhyme scheme...where every 2 lines rhyme not every 3 sound corny with 10 lines if you use 1 2 3...but good read.

Dizzy..okie verse..same things i said to code i'd say to you..you didn't have a much stronger verse..only on personal but i didnt think it was that good.

structure and flow...tie..punches..code..dizzy you had good punches if you woul have worded them differently..so im'a vote with code..keep elavaten

:) 01-25-04 03:58 PM

flow- code 187
punchlines- code 187
impact of disses- code 187
mulites- code 187
metas- code 187
overall verse consistensy- code 187

this battle was pretty one sided

vote on this battle dog

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109630

~Yo What Up~ 01-25-04 04:21 PM

code - structure was wack......flow fell off......vocab was basic.........some of the multis were good.......wordplay was aight........i was feelin some of the punches.......ok personals.......

dizzy - structure was wack......flow fell off.......vocab was weak........no good multis.......wordplay was sad (especially when u sad the only code being 999 when its 911.....LMFAO......nice)........i wasnt feelin ya punches.......no good personals.....

conclusion - code takes it in multis, wordplay and punches so he gets my vote....

VOTE - CODE 187


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