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MARVOLoUsJ1009 04-05-04 05:10 PM

edit>>>i mean more votes lol................................

Murder Phreak 04-06-04 03:16 PM

i was really feelin both of these verses and it was hard to decide because they were dead on on many different levels. But I think I'll have to give my vote to Conversion because he had the good dynamics i really enjoyed reading his bit. (btw you gotta tell me where to find that fuckin noob sign)

MARVOLoUsJ1009 04-10-04 04:27 PM

^^^^^dat was a true hate vote dunn dont eva vote on nun of my shit no more

quickpunch 04-19-04 06:40 PM

Marvolous U Bitch Ass Nigga Why Are U Battling? U Called Me Out On A Banishment Battle And I Beat U And U Were 2 Leave.....dont Call Matches U Dont Stick 2...hoe Ass Nigga....pce

MARVOLoUsJ1009 04-28-04 11:19 PM

Uppppinnn Damm Dis Shit Been Up Since January Lmaooo....yo Can Sombody Vote Pleez So This Shit Could Close

E Looch 04-28-04 11:23 PM

damn 4 month battle fuck it im votin

marv killed him easily that creative shit real seriuos nice punchs and good wrodplay

conversions decent drop but i wasnt fealin it that noob sign was corny 2

King Solo 05-01-04 02:43 PM

The Breakdown......................................... .....

FLOW
definitely gotta go to marv cuz his shit had rhythm to it from start to finish, i cud really get into his verse and feel what he was sayin. conversion u cud work on ure flow cuz it was only average in this battle
STRUCTURE
this about the only thing i can give to conversion cuz his shit was kept together and nicely structured, marv ure shit went off on a few lines.
PUNCHES
marv easily. he showed a lot of creativity in his spit with sufficient amount of multis in there and some nice personals. gud use of wordplay in ure spit and conversion ures was pretty weak u need to get more originality in ure spit, u did have a few nice punches tho.

OVERALL
Vote goes to marv for better flow and a lot of hard hittin punches!!!

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-01-04 07:38 PM

yo is niggaz blind or ya'll just dont wanna vote cuzz dis shit been up here since january...i voted on like 30 battles 2day and nobody wanna vote on my shit

DeLeon 05-01-04 07:54 PM

alright
both of these verses was cool but
Marv took this-his shit was more complex and his personals and punches
hit harder didnt have much of an opener or closer but your flow made up
for that-liked tha vocab you used to

Con-your shit was nice-flow was there- ok use of vocab
only thing that was holding you back was your punches
they could of hit harder-your opener and closer was ok not tha best

vote=marv


drop an honest vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759

..ILL.. 05-01-04 08:03 PM

converation-Few hard punches......Nice structure..Good vocab
some funny some note..Nice similes and metaphores..
Elavate more...Very complexy..and a lil hard to read but
I got it though

Marverlous-Had harder punches....Same of everything
includin structure....Nice vocab......Also
work on similies more..Nice metaphores
Complexity....Whoo...Very hard to read...Sortof...
v/AMrverlous....More hard punches


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