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edit>>>i mean more votes lol................................
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i was really feelin both of these verses and it was hard to decide because they were dead on on many different levels. But I think I'll have to give my vote to Conversion because he had the good dynamics i really enjoyed reading his bit. (btw you gotta tell me where to find that fuckin noob sign)
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^^^^^dat was a true hate vote dunn dont eva vote on nun of my shit no more
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Marvolous U Bitch Ass Nigga Why Are U Battling? U Called Me Out On A Banishment Battle And I Beat U And U Were 2 Leave.....dont Call Matches U Dont Stick 2...hoe Ass Nigga....pce
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Uppppinnn Damm Dis Shit Been Up Since January Lmaooo....yo Can Sombody Vote Pleez So This Shit Could Close
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damn 4 month battle fuck it im votin
marv killed him easily that creative shit real seriuos nice punchs and good wrodplay conversions decent drop but i wasnt fealin it that noob sign was corny 2 |
The Breakdown......................................... .....
FLOW definitely gotta go to marv cuz his shit had rhythm to it from start to finish, i cud really get into his verse and feel what he was sayin. conversion u cud work on ure flow cuz it was only average in this battle STRUCTURE this about the only thing i can give to conversion cuz his shit was kept together and nicely structured, marv ure shit went off on a few lines. PUNCHES marv easily. he showed a lot of creativity in his spit with sufficient amount of multis in there and some nice personals. gud use of wordplay in ure spit and conversion ures was pretty weak u need to get more originality in ure spit, u did have a few nice punches tho. OVERALL Vote goes to marv for better flow and a lot of hard hittin punches!!! |
yo is niggaz blind or ya'll just dont wanna vote cuzz dis shit been up here since january...i voted on like 30 battles 2day and nobody wanna vote on my shit
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alright
both of these verses was cool but Marv took this-his shit was more complex and his personals and punches hit harder didnt have much of an opener or closer but your flow made up for that-liked tha vocab you used to Con-your shit was nice-flow was there- ok use of vocab only thing that was holding you back was your punches they could of hit harder-your opener and closer was ok not tha best vote=marv drop an honest vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759 |
converation-Few hard punches......Nice structure..Good vocab
some funny some note..Nice similes and metaphores.. Elavate more...Very complexy..and a lil hard to read but I got it though Marverlous-Had harder punches....Same of everything includin structure....Nice vocab......Also work on similies more..Nice metaphores Complexity....Whoo...Very hard to read...Sortof... v/AMrverlous....More hard punches |
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