Maybe metaphors don't speak to you..

Vote- Evolve

Skiddz came very nice... but Evolve absolutely killed this one.
Was a great read.... almost perfect

Good writing from both here
Both had interesting takes on the topic
Skiddz was going nicely til the transition hit, it broke up the flow and story
Evolve's flowed smoothly throughout it all and painted a clear picture
Vote - Evolve

Evolve wins