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Yo, I'm also goin with It in this battle... picture, u need to do something with that structure. But don't blame the vote against u because of that. I read it very carefully so I could fully understand it all. The battle was real close in my opinion, I was just feeling It's verse more, he had better punches, creativity, originality. If u battled again, maybe it'd be different but It's got my vote on this one.
vote- It Return Favor Honest vote, hit up this battle for me please. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424 |
I have to say too that IT took this battle not by alot by a little tiny bit more betta punches and wordplay, not much shit in here that impresses me at all but I'll take w/e I read and my vote=IT
Since I took time of ya'llz battle can ya'll take time and return the favour honestly by clicking on a link in my sig and voting for the battle please, since I took time on yours |
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Not that good of a battle here...
Picture didn't come nice at all Barely any punches that connected Flow was off..Wordplay needed ajusting It your punches hit harder than Pics.. But still could use some wotk.. Wordplay was aight..nothing spectacular Flow'd pretty good....feeling it So V/ It hit this up with an honest vote....thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109053 |
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Ok Battle
It= Good Verse, Consistent With Punches And They Hit. Ok Wordplay With A Little Strechted Structure. Nice Vocab And Flow. I Was Feelin Ya Verse, It Waas Pretty Tyte. PP2- S T R E C T H E D L I N E S Really threw you oFf. Ok Verse, No GREAT Punches And So SO Wordplay. No Vocab < Lacked Creativity > And Bad Structure, Ok Flow. You Gotta Elevate Punches- It Flow= It Structure- It Vocab- It Wordplay= PP Vote= It Hit My Sig uP |
sorry for the post you guys my bad
its just that i wanted to say to fatal to poll when he gets 150 posts he musta thought that he polled wrong and left but its just that you need 150 ok just to clear this up and no more confusion cuz i would of already had 5 votes thank you and thanks for the match picture g/l next time ok peace |
nice battle this is my breakdown
metas -even punches-it personals -it wordplay-pp vocab - it structure -it flow- it vote = it he had the punches and his flowed |
It wins dis easy....
He had much better flo mixed wit sum nice punche s an multi's... not much wordplay but it wasnt really needed... Picture u need to change ur structure up an tweak ya punches... vote It, not hate -1 |
Vote: It
The other guys rhymes came off weak. Plus they was fucked up. There wasnt even a hint of a beat that you can put to it. It didnt have any metas...or multies...but it was a good all-around battle. |
i dunno............it came with better , harder hitting punches......a little bit more than picture..........but i felt his verse more the flow wise.....but battles are about punches............so i vote it............the structure were even good battle by both of you....and pic shows potential.....youll get the hang of it
v - it more complex/metas/punches |
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