basi:

lyric took the wordplay from the first line
he had better punches, cut you need to elevate more
all you fuckin hattas stop freeposting

vote: lyric

Wack vote. Gone -Token

yea sorry hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107921&page=2
and my topical vs rule

thanks, uppin #3. Drop a honest one please. Thanks

This is actually your 4th upping. Every post after both verses are dropped count as an upping.
-Token

lyric took this shit, it was a wack battle, but a close wack battle!!!
lyrics punches hit harder, an thats all that won the battle for him!!

Shitty vote - Gone -Token

i think lyric got this one cuz he came harder and more creative. cut....u didnt flow that well and some shit didnt seem to rhyme even in my eyes and im pretty opened minded to that shit....work on connecting punches and just all around coming more agressive. lyric came a little played but nowadays everything seems played....the de-feet is kinda over with...but u still punched better and your shit connected more nicely.

vote: lyric

close battle.

hit this up with honest votes guy...i toook the time to vote on ur shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109418

k Final uppin. PLease drop an honest one here. Leave a link and we'll check it out, thanks

lyric got this..he had better punches
...way better flow..cutas u a midwieght
dawg u let i newb get you..u punches was
absent..and u need to practice on flow..

vote:Lyric

Lyric totally got this....and here is why....cautastrophe is so whack...his shit didn't rhyme didn't flow the punches were basic the vocab was elementary.....it was bad it hurt me to read it...ow my brain....Lyric not bad good punches get more personal...it'll help you win battles...face it man straight punchin is nice but gettin personal is the shit that legends are made of......