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A complete merkin here, Mr w rite killed kurrupt wit a much better style matched wit sum funny and witty personals, kurrupt really didnt do much here, very newbyish, the punches were really really played...elevate kurrupt...

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&page=1&pp=15

thanks for the vote guys
need a few more to close this thing out
holla

actually this is my fourth up..
this should have been closed...

Mr. Rite took this battle by far....he had a much more complex verse with better punches and personals....not to mention his structure and flow were much better...korrupt just came too basic...elevate homie, look at some examples of other battles to get the idea of what it takes to win....

thank for the votes
one more to end this shit
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oh damn... Mr W.Rite straight murdered Kurrupt... Examples:

Opener :
"these fuckin newbs...not on my level.......so i'll take a new course..
why would i feed...when its obvious my verse is better than yours.."
^^Ill, killed his whole verse right there

AND

"Don’t confuse me with your weak punchlines...flows and wack bars..
I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far..."
^^Fuckin Mean 'ill shit LOL


another Killer line:
"Your just a wanna be...swinging hard...but punches seem to miss me...
Heres a reality check ...since your welfare doesn’t post until the fifteenth..."
^^ Sick, sick, sick.

Need I say more?

Kurrupt you had no real punches... elevate

W.Rite - nice job, killed this one

Vote = W.Rite

both yall hit this up when you can with an honest vote:


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109986