before i say anything else, i really don't curse in my verse an i still beat people, bleepin' it out was pretty gay

Ice man took this just barely, this battle reminds me of the ones when i first came here so it has this "I've seen this before" sense to is, Typo it was okay, but your verse wasn't constant, that's the problem I've been seein' lately, both of you get a little more creative and stay a little more consistant...

Vote: Iceman

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109348 You guys know what to do...

Okay, that bleepin' out thng seems to be a theme here.... I guess I'm really not stickin' true to my newfound code, thanks for the feedback even though everybody just said it was gay... Okay. Thanks. Uppin #4

finall uppin lets get the votes peeps!, also feel free to vote on my other battles in my sig, the reign man battle is mad slept on!

^either of you feel free to vote on my battle, since i took the time to vote on yours please...

Uppin #5
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Well, I hear ya'll, but I don't think that my verse was bad... Iceman, ur verse was good to, you had better punches, but I think I took it in creativity and wordplay. Flow was a tie. Think about this before u deny it, but maybe ur record kinda puts u in a better situation than a newbie like me? Possibly? We have very different styles, but I think this battle was very close. Anyway, let's get some more votes in here... Uppin #2
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he said it himself^^ vote ice

Vote Goes To IceMan...Although He Could Have Done Way Better..And Needs To Work On His Structure....Throw More Punches..And Don't Come So Easily..Even Though He Was A Newb..He Could've Easily Beaten You Because You Came To Simple Buddie.

Typo....Umm..Well You're New So I'm Not Gonna Go To Hard On You...Make Your Punches More Complex And Harder..Don't Do This "S**t"...Don't Do This "//"...Make Your Bars Shorter....Thats About It..Decent Verse To Be New..But You Did A Hint Of Feeding...

Iceman Said


And You Said


And Then You Turned Around And Cursed....Don't Do That...

Vote - IceMan...He Had An Overall Better Verse.