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OK, this should be in regular Front Lines... word

but I will have to go with LM - Fiorz ya punches were all played to hell. I can't even justify taking the time to give you a decent breakdown - because I will feel like I got ripped off for the value of my time.

both of you should be embarrassed.... that is all

drop an honest vote on me & Lyric's battle in this forum

pz

^................................................. ....................pz

Uppin for votes.......
Lets get this finally over with

Quote:

Originally Posted by LM

Ok here I am....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
didn't like this 1st line esp.
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
hardest line of the verse
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
well... it rhymed
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Good job rhyming with England, not a great set up tho
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
blah.. not a great closer at all

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fiorz

Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
I don't see the pic under the browser so I don't get it, but it doesn't sound good
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Alright I guess, a lil played
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
I think this was okay, using extended vocabulary
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
The set-up was weak, but I liked the finishing line
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
how r veggie burgers not worth beef, they don't have beef, but I'm sure they can afford it, played concept n e wayz

Alright so my vote goes to Fiorz, not a great battle guys, I know you can do better, I voted on y'alls batle so please vote on my battle.

uppin 4 more votes...
lets get this shit closed now people

holla...

Uppin for votes (4).........................

upiin votes for ya'll, and i would vote but fiorz iz in my crew so i cant. good battle tho!!! pzzz

Uppin for votes (5)...............................

iight...

LM

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
Nice opener... Straight to the point... Lol... 6/10
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
Very hard hittin personal... 8/10
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
Not feelin it to be honest... 4/10
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Nice enough... 5/10
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
Good personal... 7/10

Overall... 31/50... Structure was good... Vocabulary wasnt bad... Flow was good... Punches where good... And some nice personals in there aswell... Good verse... Pz...

Fiorz

Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
Good opener... Good punch... 8/10
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Not bad... Played... But not bad... 6/10
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
What? 4/10
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
Not feelin it... 5/10
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
Badly worded... Self-glorification... 5/10

Overall... 28/50... Structure wasnt bad... Vocabulary was iight... Flow was off at times... Some iight punches... Some pointless shit... Not many personals... Decent verse... Pz...

v/ LM...

Punches hit harder... Less played... More consistent verse...

Both drop a vote here please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020

Thanks...

Pz...

wow this battle has been upin for ages so im'a get it closed

vote LM