agreed.. Def Con had wittier punches
not sayins LO wasn't good, but def con
just pretty much out did LO here with his
punches.. just hit harder in my view

v/Def Con

7 - 1 def con, upping for more honest votes.. theres no need to vote with the crowd hoes.

Word Up....

Cam Took This....
Def Con Came Nice, Cam But Came With
Fire And Another Thing Is The Def Con Fed
With The Whole 12 into 34 Line...If Cam woulda
Posted 2nd Would He Have Been Able To Use
That Line? And That Was His Hardest Hittin
Punch. I Also Think Cam Was More Consistent
And Came Equipped With A Lot More Punches.

V/Lirael One

Bitch, the net's your life .. thats why im Sonning Ya ..
Kid had an out of this world experience ..
.. when he ACTUALLY left his monitor.

^Not the way to start it off.

i'll Whore this 'Vet' .. till just a Corpse is Left ..
Then make you call me oxygen ..
.. when you finish Short of Breath.

Seen the concept, even used it myself.

My Shits Insane .. damn right i'll Rip this Lame ..
Def Con won a tourney at Prowlers ..
.. perhaps that's why you Bit his Name?

There we go! Nice.

this Fake Fool a Vet?! .. ima Straight School him Next ..
your Neck's not at Stake ..
.. i'll just push a Stake through ya Neck.

Nice

this Crack Addict's .. bout to get his Back Shattered ..
i'll attempt to win his heart over ..
.. if not, at least i'll take a Stab At It! ; )

Nicely Flipped

& make sure ya Shroud Brain, gets Bounced Again ..
the fuck you gonna diss me?
.. faggot cant even Pronounce My Name!

Fake Personal

Kids been scowerin' on AIM .. Feeding for Tips ..
Here's one ..
Stop at the second line, thats where we stop Reading ya Shit.

Lmao

You'll get whored son ..
.. i'll smash ya Foreman, & snatch ya Gold Tooth
See i Call the Shots ..
.. sorta like that Sniper in Phone Booth ; )

lol

Admit it .. I OWN YOU .. & this Nerds Best ..
.. are wack name flips, lame kids here havent Heard Yet ..

Fake Personal

its not i dont like you ..
.. or how you Space ya Lines ..
it's that EVERY line you use, ends with a Basic Rhyme.

lol, nice

Ima end it there ..
.. dont really wanna offend this Textcee
Cause that way ..
.. he'll go and vote for me again Next Week ..

Bleh, poor closer.

Overall: Had a discussion with a friend that doesn't post on this site. Showed him the link etc. He explained a couple things to me(there was nothing I didn't understand, he just helped me to look at battles differently...if you're that concerned about it..contact me on AIM)

I only spit hot lines to make it quick when I'm hurtin fools
And the only thing faker than Chrit’s Lines…are this kids personals^^^

^Dope...then I realized...that's fed.

Man D- Con’s-fiding the truth- and this kid is a dying man
Dude thought he was safe dickryding…till He…PM’d me his diaphragm!!!

^Nice

A crying fan, who factually never really had a chance to harm me
Cuz generals lead his verses- I thought those cats led the army???

^Shitty

U can’t spar me- kid won’t even get a touch- let alone a wrestler
Cuz it’s known I’m white- aren’t you known as the Nigger Molester???

^First line...wtf was that? Second line, nice.

I’ll poke and pester- a king at best- you’re not even a worthy whore
I’ll give 12 hot lines- not 14 bits of shit stretched into thirty-four

^Fed

I hate to make it noticed- but you proved that you know I’m the boss
Cuz you only post all those smiley faces- when you know that you lost

Decent

Overall: Not a bad verse...but 2 fed lines is a huge no no. I've seen people get DQ'd for feeding before...why is this time different? rereading the battles...and paying close attention...making sure I've taken everything into careful consideration.

Cam had 2 fake personals...Those don't sit well with me. However, I'd rather see fake personals all day long than fed lines. And Def Con had 2 fed lines. 1 he could pass off as not being fed, but the other is blatent. I think the first was fed too, just by usage and the fact that it's at the beginning of the verse. Overall, both had some hard hitting punches...and some punches thrown that shouldn't have been. HOwever, Cam did have more...and the fact that Def Con fed is much worse than Cam's Fake Personals....in light of that...

Vote ~ Cam

im going def on this one...

the strecthed line did it for me, if it wasnt for that Li would get the vote from me

dope verse guys

Just like koncept said....



Which is true, but i think they allow feeding, not really sure what the new rules are but w/e. The only two lines i liked were the diaphragm line and the 12 into 34 line. L.O had a consistent verse, which had some nice lines. L.O had some better punches, and he took it with the wordplay, so....

V/ Lirael One