RapVerse.com Community - StreetzGullie vs BlackGod

Just giving an honest opinion:
(if you have any honor in you, you will!) jk

I'll do this line by line:

Black's open:

Quote:

I'll pop his voice box when I hoist glocks with weary-eyed focals
.............Leavin holes in it deeper than Barry White Vocals

[BOLD]Decent, I kinda felt it , except, it was in no way directed personally[/BOLD]

Streetzgullie's open:

Quote:

im nice wit the flows.....lyrically....ya WEAK!:
but tech to ya throat....and leave u wit out a "Voice" for "Da Streetz":

[BOLD]wasn't really a bunch, basic multies, lil choopy[/BOLD]

Black's Line 3,& 4:

Quote:

Shit's like Sex Ed Classes when dude gets clapped up
This fag'll be in the morgue just another fruit that's wrapped up

[BOLD] it was an attempt at a punch, good structure, syllable count, etc[/BOLD]

Streetz 's Line 3, & 4

Quote:

what u think....i dont walk wit my macks out?:
crazy..only time u beat me...is when "God" "Blacks" out:

[BOLD] kinda basic, basic multies, could bee extended, for better flow[/BOLD]

Black's Line 5, 6, 7,8

Quote:

I slap weak emcees like you for makin noise when they speak
And when your bitches screamin that's the 'Voice of the Streetz'
Like 'X-Files Reruns' for votes he keeps givin niggas 'Scully'
Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'

[BOLD] I agree the 'Voice of the Streetz' line is played, dope structure,
a better attempted punch,[/BOLD]

Streez's Line 5,6,7,8

Quote:

its gullie dawg....told u...ya need levitation wit ya words:
say u beat me.....but im the insperation to this herb:
told u once.....im ya damn INSPERATION:
bout to "son" this fag....and i aint talkin bout family relations.....:

[BOLD] still no punches, basic multies, better structure than the 1st lines[/BOLD]

Black's close:

Quote:

Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'
'I'll bet 10' on it...tryna shank me wit butter knives? that's lame
'Kickin his dome' now 'losin's on his mind' cuz 'da-feet is on brain'
Grabbin da Tek and start popppin one of Dynasty Soldiers
.....Applyin da 'heat ta his mug' like 'Cofee Folgers'

[BOLD] again better structure, better multies, decent vocab, decent end[/BOLD]

Streetz close"

Quote:

is more like........lungin and dissin:
cause like blind boxer......all ya punches is missin!:....

[BOLD] His 1st real punch, I agree AGAIN it is kinda played, but better than the open of the verse, AGAIN basic multies, choppy structure, [/BOLD]

I got to give this to Blackgod:

Black's weak points:
more wordplay & vocab
better punches

Streetz weak points:
structure, try to take those :: off the end it looks just as good, the same
(extend structure and flow)
could work on better multies, wordplay etc

Both got to keep elevating

I said this in another battle:

Quote:

"so and so won, but if was up against a more experience emcee, might ;ve lost this"

Keep that in mind!

JamesJr.