ite ite........brethen no doubt.......nice punches....nice flow.....n ok personalz.....good shyt man.....
oda kid.....ur shyt waz weak......no punches.(barely).....all i can say iz "elevate"
punches: brethen......takes it eazily
flow: brethen.....like da rhythmx
strucutre:.......both werk on it but brethenz waz betta but 4 a small portion
vote: brethen....
n dis time repay favor......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110456
thnxx

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Feeble sums up why my vote goes to Brethren, other cats verse was all filler and the punches, personals, and flow were all in Brethren's corner. Good verse but like Feebs said don't force creative punches like that, just sit back and let loose witty. No need to think of the most creative thing as long as it hits hard. You took this battle hands down though so my vote goes to you, nice job.
Vote Brethren
Drop a vote here if you would, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111365