^^^thanx for the vote.........

UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!

CMON HOES, VOTE LIKE MOFOS!!!!!!!!!

Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dont Sleep On Dis Hoes!!!!!!!!!!

E-yo, u stupid fucka, you try to sound like ur ass is black//
But the only freakin' quality I see in your ass is wack//
^hmmm well thats a missed punch with weak vocab...
The sufficient skills needed to test me you're ass seriously lacks//
Cause findin' my rhymes is like findin' needles in a black haystack//
^ok not a bad meta the haystack is black though lol
Guess who's back? Oh, it's that fuckin' Eminem wannabe//
Soulfire right now is more gangsta than ur ever gonna be//
^well thats not really a punch its more filler
My rhymes flow like da Nile, drivin' a path straight thru ur verse//
I put this dumb bitch in denial, face the facts, ur rhymes are worse//
^well its an Ok meta but the punch fell of drastically
You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you
^this is a simplistic closer work on your vocab.....


dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/
^this is nice multis....the punches are weak though....
dawg u just a "dull"-emcee, ya punches r "curved", u claim u got it "locked", but u must have forgot the "whole-key"/
u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/
^ok this is good punchin nice multis.....stop the quotes and the dashes...
this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/
^nice punches ...don't talk about him blowin guys....thats just dumb....
im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/
^well then this is ok ...the punch is missing but its a ok meta.....
im leavin ya sittin-pissed, cause u tryed to "catch" my rhymes, but u must have forgot to "get-ya-mit"/
so keep spittin-ya-shit, cause literally thats all it is, so do us all a favor and just start slittin-ya-wrists/
^well thats not nice...jk fine punch ....FIX YOUR FUCKIN STRUCTURE>>>^^^^^
winner yo what up.....

nice battle but punches go to yo,slow goes to yo and closer goes to yo cuz it rhymed better and didnt use da same words twice like soulfire did in his closer---------------------->You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you.//
dont ever do dat again kills da flow
vote=yo wat up
hit up any of mah open battles ppl.
also yo wat u u should try out for d/s

alright battle a lot of good punches but yo what up takes this one
he had better flow,puches and multis plus he was alot more creative with his vocab

soul work on your flow your rhymes worked but i wasent feeling you flow and structure too basic.....

vote - Yo

sorry i cant poll vote yet all i can do is give my honest opinion

punches yo: dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/

multies yo: im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/

personals yo: u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/

flow soul: his bars wasnt stretched as bad

overall: i gotta go with you what up..no hate just opinion

both vote on my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110386

Uppin # 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!

Cmon Dont Sleep On Dis Now Mothafuckas!!!!!!!!!

Uppin #3

both sucked honestly....
soul had the better structure...
but Yo had the better punches and multi's.....
I can't really say much here, It was a battle to get thru...
other than visually lookin nice....Yo whatup took this easily...

vote Yo

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yo what up wins this one
he had more multis/meta4
and his also hit alot harder
he had good word usage
and his shit followed
i didnt feel that soulfire came that bad but it wasnt too good either
rarely seen a personal from him
battles r all bout personals

v/ yo wat up