uppin./...................................to get over wit

all my lines are metaphors..uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Just a Old man Wheelin his Wheelchair.come on Dawg Retire..
Had to stop Chasin his Dreams...cuz his Arms were Tired ..
^hehe kinda funny nice opener...
Learn my craft cause to me: This fucking nerd is basic..
Cause if losing builds character..Tox..you’re it’s 1st creation.
^not feelin it so much saw your vision didn'tlike the execution...
Seen Ya Pic Tox…Not a Pretty Site,just plenty of spots..
He look so much like E.T. CBS gave him their 7:30 slot..
^nice wordplay...good personal....
Naw dude aint dope I’ll solve em by layin some big gunholes…
You might think he’s a problem the way Tox. stays unknown..
^and this is what?...a punch?
Wanna end ya life wit the biggest knifes, never leavin ya house
YA figure lifes a bitch,
So Text Will Play death an be who u been dreamin about..
^um....ok....intrestinryhme scheme there
Im stayin 100Proof .. so I get mad when Im sober..
Your verse had a such a happy ending.. nah, we’re just glad it was over
^nice closer good punch.....


Blind spits?? I know u gonna diss my-pics... i must be a psychic/
go ahead n try it... i'll freeze you solid then hit u wit an ice pick/
^ahahah he caught you......
my punchlines are acid... one hit and ya brain is jus fried/
i could beat you if i was holding back... like straining my rhymes/
intrestin i like it......
Nuthin but a pussy... you could run... or stay and just die/
Oh look... that's LT behind the window... waving goodbye/ **
^played off that avy too many times....
what...you could smell ya moms pussy even before i checked in??/
Usually I would never forget to brush before i score my next win/
^Bahhahhahahahahaha
Wanna bet me, that you aint got the right to be an emcee??/
I'll shoot 'hoops wit ya eyeballs' just to prove you only 'net-see'/
^nice wordplay..good shit
1 hour?? shits a stresser... no way LT can spit wit the pressure/
i'll rip ya record... wanna way out?? go find the 'X' like hidden treasure!/
^meh...not feelin it.....
yo faggot... why you check out guys pics?? I bet you like it/
call me Blade... cuz you try'n bite me... like Wesley Snipes bitch/
^well this is a good allusion to BLade
I have a question... you made a callout... but only for skills/
so did you mean everyone else or were you not including yourself?/
again strange rhyme scheme here at the end....

Overall i think tox got this one......

Lum-had some iight shit betta personals but thats about it

toxic-good wordplay and nice punchlines.....overall you took this battle

vote-toxic

LMAO @ Luminary bitching and getting this re-opened.... now that's some pussy shit...

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I really liked text's wheelchair line as an opener. he had a good body and finished solidly.
Tox sounded like he was trying to hard, and his flow fell apart near the end.
I can't vote yet, but i think this one goes to Text.

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i dunno who came weaker.. lol a pretty bad battle from both of you for having (heavyweight) but no beef or hating keep doin your thangs. im gonna vote for luminary, i think his punches were harder and he just plain came harder. thats all nice day fellas

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Hey Can we get some votes to close this?? Its been up for weeks...

I came to vote but luminary text is banned.