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-   -   Saltshaka vs. LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=110270)

Saltshaka 01-29-04 07:30 AM

Uppin 3rd time............
Thanks for all tha votes!
And aight skandalz..i'll battle u afta I get 100 posts.....

Saltshaka 01-29-04 04:24 PM

aight...uppin 4'f time.............................................. ................................

Saltshaka 01-29-04 08:35 PM

Aight...letz try and finish this battle tonight...Sumbody plzzz....hit this battle up...I wanna new battle..but dun wanna keep up wit both

White-Virus 01-30-04 01:22 PM

This battle was pretty close...I think Lyricallyinsane1 Did underestimate this cat...For a newbie..he spit damn well....Nice structure..He needs to work on harder and more direct punches towards his opponent though...

He had a good opener..
Lyricall man...I just didn't like your shyt one bit dude...
My vote...

Saltshaka

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

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MichaelMadness 01-30-04 01:33 PM

Ight
Punches-Ss has harder hittin punches(opener was a nice touch)LI Yer ish was played at that but also worded horrible/
wordplay- Creativity was used throught the entire battle, but again LI shit was jus worded bad, so this gave saltshaka somewhat of the upperhand
flow-again because of the bad structure and wordplay use by LI it messed his flow up big time..I see signs of u being good LI jus reword yer shit better and hit harder w/ punches and personals SS nice solid flow, constinect wordplay, good punches
structure-LI Structure was wack, kinda messed up his whole shit

V/ Saltshaka

Honestly judge and vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833

LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 01-31-04 09:34 PM

aighht thanks for the feedback.............jus get 1 more vote so i can get in a notha battle................

Saltshaka 02-01-04 01:38 AM

someone vote on this battle Sop we can get this battle ova wit...itzzz old

Saltshaka 02-01-04 05:23 PM

Everyone gonna watch Panthers kill Patriots???

lols hit this shit up


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