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iM UPPING FOR SOME MORE FAIR AND REASONABLE VOTES.
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kryogenix showed his experience even though he didnt did it pretty hard, but he take it on all fields: punches, flow, enjoyment...
vote:dixie normous give a vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1139201 |
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I'm a mercenary armed with the spoken word
your confidence against me is simply absurd. And since a mercenary i be actin like I gots to get paid to rock the mic. whatever you shoot will be infantile all efforts against me are merely futile cuz i rep from the village where we got it rough so pussy rhymes you bring won't be enough. it's my first time on the site and i smell your fear but you been on here for a coupla years. my rhymes make blood drip out of your ears and soon you gonna be drownin in tears you should try to fight, you ought to I'm the stranger mom said not to talk to I'll chop you up with a sense of art and the police won't be able to find the parts. _____________________________________ ok this was ok and had decent attempt but 5/10 need to elavate a lil some,direct yer punches more and be more creative overall nice try but not enough ________________________________________ Dixie nicer around the burners than Chef Emeril Laggase You couldnt kick good shit if you was deep in manure doin' karate I come with the best lyrics and all types of hell tricks And I'll straight Peirce your back like # 34 for the Celtics This kid's gay,after I eat him alive I get cavities like hersey People look and ask who he is like a personalized jersey When I read your verse, Dirty, I wasnt in a least way shook And I always come first like the T & F part in the Eastbay Book I'm really taking it easy on this guy thats tryin to be tough But to be truthful..he lyrics is all ass like B.E.T. uncut Im ownin this newbie and really leavin' him a big mess Cause you're half real like Mitchell missin' Ness ___________________________________________ this was like a 7/10 and had better directed punches and personals so thats why this kid won,overall nice battle verse keep it up ___________________________________________ vote/kryo................... hit my link up in my sig cuz i took the time,peace |
Punches: Kryo, his punches were more effective, harder-hitting
Wordplay: Neither of you had wordplay Multis: Neither, you guys need to flip some multis, makes a better read Opener: Kryo, the Emiril Lagasse line was a lot better than the mercanary line, it was a punch. Dirty, you always want to open up big. Closer: Kryo, your second to last line was a setup, but you could've put a wordplay in somewhere. Again, Dirty's was lacking, no punches, not effective. Vote - Kryogenix Both need to work on multis, helps with delivery. Definitely need to see a punch from Dirty, if you want to win a battle, good vocabulary though. Dixie nicer around the burners than Chef Emeril Laggase Best line of this battle. By Kryo I'll chop you up with a sense of art and the police won't be able to find the parts Best bar by Dirty, could be considered a punch, but didn't make much sense. Hit up one of my battle with an honest vote, please. PS, this is a 1000 characters vote, I hope it's good enough. |
I am new to the lexicon of this site and I don't know "merkin." Please Explain.
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Someone explain to me how y'all are referring to Kryogenix in a battle between dixie normous and I?
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Dixie had a pretty good well off verse with a lot of punches. Metaphors or multis were being thought about or looked at they were mostly jus flow and structure practically if you ask me. da content of Dixie was on punches but more on dissing as well LOL same shit ya know what I mean yo. Dirty end zone well..........was really basic but let's get a breakdown for him shall we. Dirty end zone was glorifying himself and his hood at some times while Dixie's punches were beatin da shit out of his ass. Dirty end zone next time you come on a freestyle website you supposed to diss your opponent not freestyle about your hood. Well even though Dirty's rhymes were basic, choppy, and not directed I guess he did o.k. The real winner is Dixie because he freestyled about Dirty and dissed him by directing metaphors and punchlines actually and it wasn't about himself or his hood..................
vote=Dixie please vote on both or one of ma battles, thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451 |
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I changed my name from Dixie Normous to Kryogenix..and merking means to really beat some bad.. |
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OPEN: Dixie - made me into what he was goin to say next about the other cat . . Dirty's was just weak
CLOSE: Dixie - basically the same as what i said in "OPEN" PERSONALS: Dixie - his made me laugh PUNCHES: Dixie - they just hit harder . . Dirty's was just wack FLOW: Tie - both had pretty nice flow VOTE: Obviously Dixie i read Dirty's and i thought this shit was gonna be a weak battle . . and i go to Dixie's . . he made the battle fiyuh . . props to the battle . . i can't poll vote but DIRTY! YOU GOT FUCKIN MERKED! can yall return the favor? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112155 it'll be appreciated |
your ass should be banned! read the rules you fuckin noob!
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Not sure why this was closed but..
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Dixie merked the shyt outta this herb...better flow, punches, wordplay, and structure. Dirty you really need to elevate son, don't call out beasts on tha mic...stick to newbz
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