For posting so much you should be 100 times better than that, not completly bad, how long did it take you to write that?really. Props though I like the story line and the flow was sick for the begining then you started to drift alittle, its all to the good though. Overall I liked it, elevate.

Am I In The League?

I really liked this ...very creative.
good wording I enjoyed. best i have seen from you.
kepp it up Gngsta