Props to both for the battle both took totally different views.
Sarcasm-your main detail here was 'Detail. your imagery was the nice thang about it & i enjoyed how your flow matched your sense of Detail. the story was pretty vague but I felt like this was more thoughts than storyline Key-Nice story. I felt myself gettin into it a lot but that odd moment findin myself dropping off, but it was a lil diffent from the sad stories I have read even tho I did fall off sumtimes you still gave a good edge and Jimmy was a well thought of character. Props to for digging that out. V/Sarcasm-I took Detail & Imagery over storyline in this one pz |
I'm not being the deciding vote.
I am giving this until I go to sleep tonight, then it will be closed, and be a tie. get voters. |
poo head..i'm up 3 2..I thought..
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