uppin #4. Drop a honest vote and a link..bout ta hit ^these up now

Last uppin...lookin ta close this..come on in and drop an honest one guys

Lyric
A better overall battle verse..
Just much more elevated then his opponents..
Go battle better ppl & get better yourself.
Ok drops by both..
But vote Lyric.

Battle was reopened. So first uppin, drop an honest vote here

uppin #1. Drop an honest well explained vote here and leave a link

lyric
lyric took this one he had everything better really,
better, harder hitting punches, better wordplay, he had more complexity
better vocab, nice format!!
all this makes a more suitable battle verse!!



reece killah
your verse was just too simple, not many hard hitting punches, a lot of shitty vocab,

you said sentances twice in the bar, you shouldn't reall do that in a verse, unless its a name,
you just need to elevate!!

peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111180
^sorry for the freepost plz, drop an honest vote on that^

peace