killa- you need to fix your structure, i had a hard time understanding yor verse.

n'zyme- your vese was straight, punches and wordplay where nice and you clearly took this


vote n'zyme

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thanks for the honest vote..........up up and away.............

uppin this shit.........honest votes that follow the rubric only.....

damn...........votes people.........don't sleep on this shit....

N'zyme murdered this cat,
every line was nice, better personals, defo harder hitting punches,
he had a structure, his wordplay was nice, an it was a good battle verse!!

killa conceptz, that was absoulute shit realy,
fix ya struture, make your punches hit him, hit with some personal,
you had no wordplay really, your cretivity an ability to make punches obviously dont match!!
jus elevate!!

peace

N Zyme clearly takes this... more witty punches.. good personals.. structure/flow was on point etc..
Every catergory taken..
Killa.. sort out the structure first.. then try and add some witty personals to hit real hard..
Some decent attempts, but without a good flow your verse was virtually useless... cheetah/spot line was creative.. aim for similar..
Basically a very one sided battle..
For originality, structure, and witty punches..

Vote - N 'Zyme

yes^^ he basically said it all..just elevate aight?

uppin............................................. .

yo n'zyme takes this easy...HARD hittin punches...good personals....nice flow...shit lookin like n'zyme got great potential on this site aslong as he keeps it up

killa you need to hit with harder punches and throw personals in...thats what its all about

yo hit this shit up...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111543

ill throw down honest votes to nebody dat throws down on dat shit

a yo just finish dis' battle off
uppin'

hurry