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my structure wasn't great but read over and you could easily see i got this uppin' 1
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Killa, work on ya struc....it was hard to read, ya rhymes were mostly pretty simple and basic, rhyme scheme was just ok...you had 1 or 2 decent punches but nothing special...u lacked on wordplay and metas....your verse was just so-so
Gazeebo your verse was good through out. you had stronger punches then him and you could tell that your more advanced....ya had some ok wordplay and metas were there but not great....ya verse was overall good though my vote - Gaz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. not a good vote. you know better. - Feeble Minded |
this batle is very one sided.....killaconcepz sucks...alot...he shouldnt be allowed to battle..his struture sucked and he had virtually no punches...he's just wack...L-E-VATE kid..
v/gazeebo Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
gazeebo took this one pretty easily!!
his punches were better, an thats why he wins! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom |
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