Yo this battle goes to Freeman for the simple fact that mc shadow lyrics were just to retarded. He tried to sound so intelligent he just made himself look stupid. But overall neither of the two were very amazing.

freeman-got this he executed his punches good and his flow was good
and he had decent personals

remix-u punches were ok not very effective...ur flow was good..and u had decnt perssonals


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freeman got this one won
had better puches flow was aight but could've been better
that tight collar shit was hot
yall keep doin thing and you will grow

Freeman takes this one because of sheer substance, although his style and flow betray him for a vet compared to the herbish style and structure of Remix. This was clearly a battle of someone seasoned and someone trying to get the hang of things and i think Remix can learn from this. Freeman's flow was on, the structure allowed for the wordplay and punches to hit hard and he efficiently mixed witty punches and wordplay and punches that disregarded wit to simply hit hard. Don't know why you used the italics but your verse was nice man, win's yours.
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