carson took this one hands down.
flow was concise. no extra word usage. thats a big advantage. the close was too crazy.
tele you had good intentions but it took too many words to get your point across. against a good rapper who delivers quick punches thats gone be a loss most times. your good punches just took too long to come out.

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ightt carson had better punches and structuer tele u need some eleivation in some parts but was a nice battle.carsons punches and wordplay won this battle..nice battle tho..Tele work on the punches and word play
wordplay:carson
punches:carson
structuer:carson
metaphoers:carson
my vote:carsonjetx2

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carsonjextX2
a nice compact verse which contained everything really,
nice punches,
wordplay,
personals,
second line didn't make sense, but your closer killed it


telekentikz
your struture was good, but the stretched lines let it down!!
some aiight punches, an some were played, but overall you dropped pretty weak, an didn't get near carson overall

my vote carsonjetX2


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111143