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come vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229 |
I would go with Thing as well. He had his shit together. Sorry newbie.
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Uppin5
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jae, you tried to impress with your vocab, but your punches were weak, your wordplay wasn't the best, an you had hardly, if not any attempts at personals.
you need to make your punches, direct an hard hitting!! thing, yours wasnt the best, but your punches hit, they were consistant, wordplay wasn't too bad, you had a good verse, but it was still weak, you gotta elevate, an make your punches hit a little harder!! vote thing, better verse!! plz try to hit up both battles in my sig!! thanks |
Not good on either part...
Jeagutta, wow your just damn confusing, your punches were non-existant and half of your vocab is way out of context....had u of chilled wit the multi's focused on the punches an shortened your structure u mighta won this one....but wait...I jus said to change your whole verse.... Thing, You came very wak here, basic, nothing special.....You punches were there but blah....One thing u had goin for u was structure....this helped your personals and flo....By far less of what I had expected, but alot better than Jeagutta vote- thing |
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Eh.. Kinda weak..... Structure was horrible Punches were semi weak Personals were weak also Wordplay was decent..... Overall.......12/20 Quote:
Better... Good structure Personals were decent Punches were denently hard hitting Wordplay was ... eh... what can i say It was decent............................... Overall.......14.5/20 V/Thing Came better overal.. |
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