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LethalNJectionz 02-02-04 05:49 PM

come on guys.. uppin #{3} for {poll votes}.. drop a link and ill hit it up..

LethalNJectionz 02-03-04 12:31 PM

come on guys and poll some votes.. vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote! uppin {4}

Daffer22 02-03-04 12:34 PM

I'm votin for Lethal cuz good flow, had some good rhymes in there, gud punchlines, Proof had a good openin i thought origanality was whack so that'sa tie
Vote: Lethal

801ghost 02-13-04 08:05 PM

proof did good for spittin first but lethal had better word play.

LethalNJectionz 02-13-04 08:16 PM

uppin nuber 5 people, mod just close this, no win necessary..

Brethren 02-13-04 08:18 PM

Punches: Lethal, much better punches, Proof's just seemed to drag off into endless babble
Wordplay: Lethal, had the combust line, even though it was a weak wordplay, it's wordplay
Multis: Lethal, had a set 3 syllables every rhyme, good structure
Personals: Proof, Proof attempted, though they were whack, still personals
Opener: Lethal, decent punch opener
Closer: Lethal, kinda weak, but still a lot better

Vote - Lethal N Jectionz

...Washed Up N Far-From-Dope, This Faggots Droppin Bars-Of-Soap!..Keep Wishin Youll Eat An Emcee And Most Definitly Starve-From-Hope...
Dope bar (I thought)

if u came to denver, ud get capped down
Ultra weak line, where does this go??? Find new stuff to rap about.

Return the favor in my battle with Rule

X-Acutor29 02-13-04 08:35 PM

I would vote lethal he has a better flow come check mine in:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113883

Archeologist 02-13-04 08:39 PM

Aiight ima do this fair...........
Lethal...great verse you had great punches which were hitting and agood opener and closer... Your flow was very smooth and all linked up nicely......

Proof...Not a bad verse,you were swinging punches but alot of them were going nowhere,however some of them hit..your 1st line was good but the 2nd line was played... your closer was good i liked that.Flow was aiight it was a bit patchy though.

Archeologist 02-13-04 08:42 PM

Sorri imissed the bit where ishould post who won.........
\/0te.......LethalNJectionz

will you both Please return the favour on my battle.............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113897

Archeologist 02-14-04 08:44 AM

Yes you were right Proof it was the wrong link here you go...........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113910


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