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Se7en's Verse, I’ll twist ya shit in the middle, so his skills look a little to little It’s good to see, how in his sig he brags he beat a newb named Art Official WAck Opener 1000 plus posts, still seems his skill and talent is a complete joke This guys so dumb, he sniffs a whole letter of anthranx and bleeds coke Nice Wordplay Hard to figure out, he claims he’s elevated and his rep is bigger now He could be a gun slinger and still not know how the pulling of trigger sounds Ok LInes I’ll be a giver, hit ya so hard that your bitch ass craps your liver This guy couldn’t be criminal, if his ass was related to jack-the-ripper Played So new, so unused, make your style look a little mangled and loose You done “digged your own grave”, while my rhymes strangle ya like a noose Decent CLoser Menolin's Verse, you couldn't key up tight raps, if your keyboard came in spandex, your ryhmes come.... then colapse... like eager men giving bad sex, Nice Opener you dis-respecting 'pac', placing upon him your wack status, your sigs say untold truth, ....................should be "is thier any RB crew that aint raped us" Stretched and Wack i would catch you............ but i don't really like to backtrack*, im rippin the shit out of this kids, like little kids with party packs, Blah yo can tell no one likes you... when opportunity knocks you out, i hit you with mathmatics.... flip, twist and fuck you about, Wack my lines decieve your vision....... shit, call me your eye-con(icon) if you spat of the 'right' of your mouth, your lines still be wrong, Nice Closer My vote goes to Menolin. Se7en, your verse was very simple. You didn't have any punchlines or creativity, but your flow and wordplay was nice. Menolin's verse was a lil better, he came wit harder punches which i see as the bread winner. We Need PoLL VOTES, Return the FAVor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111064 |
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nice battle se7en, still could go either way,
you elevated a lot recently!!! |
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Shut up..moron. Obviously this was somewhat close.. But no doubt Menolin takes this. Creativity in punches, aswell as personal facts..which makes for the best punches. Where well presented in Menolin's verse. Where as in Seven's they werent there. at all. Seven had some good lines.. not bad...especially for a Dynasty Soldier. But Menolin was just better point blank. Some potential quotables...not really a enjoyable battle to read though.. Slightly boring & a bunch of old concepts.. But vote goes to Menolin |
Se7en had a real good rhymescheme, and a few decent punches..but most of his stuff was just kinda hard disses....the line about "he's so dumb he sniffs a letter of anthrax and bleeds coke.." I wasn't really feelin that too much...seemed like u just needed somethin to rhyme....flow was kinda off too due to ur long bars...
Menolin had a better flow..vocab was about even..rhymes were also kinda even..punchlines definately go to Menolin tho...he came hard from the begining to the end..I liked the 2nd line..about eager sex or w/e..lol pretty creative... vote- Menolin... can someone hit up my battle against village pimp? it's in my sig... |
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