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My bars were strechted because I use big words. Three of my words would make one of his lines "contenders gathered together". Peoples starting to give me a little respect tho. Thats all I want anyway, my skill will grow. Ive only been here for about a month. Thanks for voting
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Wise's Verse,
..Aight yo Telekinetic.. I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit Not That Good ..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans Pretty Good Wordplay T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime Pretty Nice Non-intelligent.. MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared Not Good At ALL ..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me .Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty Thats More Like It Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines.. .....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass.. ........................without using a muthafucking punchline Nice Flow And nice bar T's Verse, Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade? Wack No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly Nice DiSs/Lines I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit" Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get It Was Decent Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace Nice Wordplay You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest" Nice Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill Prolly Yo Best Vote: Telekinetic Telekentic You Had Better Punches,Ok Multis Wordplay And Punchlines.... Return Favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110046 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110974 Poll Votes Only , |
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I use big words too... Like "tha, ya, a, be"..lol Quote:
^way to admit you recylced that line ;) Explains tha no personal lol..... |
Damn A good battle indeed.
Punches- Both had some humerous hard hittin punches, But Tele Jus brought more to the table, Came harder..the crock of shit line and the escalade line stuck out the most... Personals- Both had some descent personals, I think wise put more creativity in to his personals,Intraduced u to death shit was kinda played but at the same time it was nice...wise def. got personals Flow- Both had ight flows, wise kinda fucked his up at the end of his shit..so that gave tele the upper hand and made his flow better.... Structure-Both had ok structures, Both sqaubled at the end of there shit...tie wordplay- Tele Used more basic words, kinda played,wise put more creativity into his shit, ok use of meta's.....Meek decsion but I'm gonna have to say wise got this Wow this battle was so close its not even funny...But i think Tele Just brought more humerous shit to the table, though some of it was played it still hit harder then wise's shit, Wise had some good punches but some were worded uncorrectly,couldve been worded better....I'm gonna have to go w/ tele just becuase his punches were much more humerous and he had more of a solid flow... V/ Telekinetic |
My bad bout the free post forgot to add this in there
Please Honestly Vote on this Battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111140 |
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I was talking about how played your last line was. I used a version of it a few weeks ago. |
Originality - Both
Punches - Wise.. felt Tele had too much in one line so kinda lost its force Personals - Both.. not as many as expected tho Flow - Wise.. Tele was vergin on stretched.. easier to follow Wise Structure - Wise.. always like it Opener - Tele.. preferred it Closer - Tele.. witty.. dope.. clever.. etc VoTe = Wise Ways Tele opened an closed nice but i couldnt really catch on to a flow cos the lines were kinda stretched.. right idea but too many words.. props tho.. Wise was consistant an the structure made for a smooth flow.. well done both.. nice battle. Drop a vote on either of these plz: vs wogzta http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 vs W1CKED http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341 ...1 |
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You are only allowed to up a battle 5 times....You've upped it 7
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V/ Wise ways , due harder punches & a more consistant, .. other cat came a lil avarage in my opinion , .. but was ok , .. Wise ways wins due punches..
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