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yo do me a favor and vote on Daffer22 vs Baz187
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^^^ no, you wak ass motherfucker .
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one-sided battle...an eazy win for brethen....he didnt have 2 try very hard...
james..ur flow waz ok...not thatttttt bad.....but work on that...and make ur punches stronger....add more excitment and vocabulary.....ok for a newb...keep elevating.... brethen- good shyt wit da flow....nice punches....n ok structure....nice vocab.....overall- ur verse waz good....not dat boring.... break d o w n .... punches: brethen- his came harder and were on the point.....(experience) flow: .....brethen barely.....both gotta work on that....u gotta catch a rhythm....n stay on da topic strucutre: brethen....he kept hiz verse neat....not all over the place...james- werk on that.......even out the linez.... vote: brethen....no hate ......no d/r.......1 keep elevating-james... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358 ^^return da favor...... |
james jr takes dis,good battle but james puches hit harder just,flow and structure was taken by jamejr too.keep it up both of us.
v/james jr PLZ RETURN DA FAVA:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860 |
got to close this battle......
uping # 1 JamesJr. |
ima have to give this one to brethren he was spittin hard on punches anf flo all that shit.
other dude did aight he just need to elevate a lil bit vote=brethren hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...803#post1151803 |
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punches-breth style-tie wordplay-james personals-breth creativity-breth overall-breth Brethren had the harder punches, he did his homework too. james flow was lil choppy, the punches needed to be better, also work on the creativity as well. vote-breth fav line breth- Quote:
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Thanks, i'll hit those up later .
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Uppin #4, last vote, c'mon, drop a link, I will return the favor
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upping for the #3 time
just want to end this........ so I can battle more peeps |
James: i was feelin the first 3 lines, if you would've kept it up i'd be sreaming murder.
Bretheren: line one was clean, too nice... the second two what are you thinking? i realize act rhymes with dendropheliac, but c'mon. James: lines 6-10 i'm lovin em they flow well and they hit hard too Bretheren:"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself, Like this kid was battling himself in the mirror, you're losing yaself, You asking to die battling me, just stick an axe in your thigh, You ain't an ass-pirate, then why you got a patch in ya eye?," Yeah they ryhme... and James:"This bitch is thin.... and brittle" NO, no, no, expunge this line from your mind, you didn't need a filler that bad. Bretheren:"Ohio?! Alien abducted ass live on a farm, why don't you just offer them crops?," LMAO that's great. James: closer was ok nothing spectacular, but it worked well Bretheren: That's how you end it? It's almost a toss up, if Bretheren had a closer that did something... anything, he'd have it, but i give this to JamesJr. Good job, work on the word play. |
What?! ^^^^ .
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up n As I said gotta end this battle
there might be a Round 2 JamesJr. |
james has my vote cuz if u say this out loud his seemes to have more to it than brethans did, and
"Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself" that jus seemes reel childish 2 me vote = james jr. |
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