I agreed with most of what cutastraphe said:



[QOUTE]Lyric:
Punch Lines:5/10
Structure:7/10
Vocab:7/10
Flow:8/10[/QUOTE]






JamesJr.

(Just a personal Vote) Honest opinion*

Drop a good vote and leave a link. This battle was reopened so this is up #1

uppin #2 for honest explained votes.

lyric - you had a nice flow though out the whole battle...never really fell off, ya structure was good and the lines were a good length. ya punches were good n u had some decent personals..word play was just so-so and overall..i say this wasnt a bad verse..

flash - your flow was horrible through out. your lines were s t r e t c h e d and even took up 2 lines...your structure..well again thats the same as flow, ya lines were stretched, cut them down to Lyric's length or even less..it'll help u out a lot. u actually had some ok punches..none that really stuck out though...work on those both

v/ lyric...harder punches, better flow, more wordplay, and an overall better verse