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:.Faceless.: 02-03-04 03:42 AM

yo micheal...you wanna battle me....we do it with two different styles?

LyriCali Gifted 02-03-04 03:50 AM

CAMROK:

Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II
'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew
Not a bad opener, good imagery of the WWII
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
lol, nice punch
Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white'
I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight
Came off a good punch, made this one look played out and weak
Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded?
Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted
Kinda a dry humor, ok nonetheless
U started this shit, and now your getting discarded
Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded
Ok punch, nice flow here
It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes'
wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes
your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes
Good personal punch, good closer


flash:

I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit
disinterested in lettin him live...
Sick multi, good opener
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
lol, nice
the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs
Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin
Good flow, ok punch
distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still
sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill
Nice wordplay, especially the first line
he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill
picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its
murder in the first
Interesting style change, it fits, and yet it doesnt
hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst
dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass
Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last?
Dang, nice closer and finish


Personally, I think that Flash took this with a much better approach and more creativity. This was not easy, and CAMROK, keep doin what u do, flash just brought it too hard. Vote-flash .. peace, and nice job to both, loved this one!

Check this one out:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111789

LyriCali Gifted 02-03-04 03:51 AM

that link i posted was one i thought as also a very tight battle.

:.Faceless.: 02-03-04 03:58 AM

yo MichaelCorleone if you wanna battle i will battle you....but its gonna be a 2 style battle...to show that you got a lil bit a skill and you aint jus spittin insults...you down...hit me up in bitchslapped or pm me

Baz187 02-03-04 04:17 AM

This was some mad shit, CamRok them micheal jackson lines where of tha hook.
Flow- Camrok - His flow aws brutall, Flash at parts u jumped, but was still dope
Punches- Flash- Although Camrok had the good Jacko lines, Flash had more punches
Wordplay-Flash, just read it and u'll see, although Camrok u were still aiight,
Overall- Gotta be Flash, but this was close.

CAMROK 02-03-04 08:56 AM

alriht, com'n... get the votes up!! lets go! Upppin (3)

CAMROK 02-03-04 01:39 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppppppinnn (4)

Leave links.. I'll return favors and checkout battles.

:.Faceless.: 02-03-04 02:17 PM

uppin (3)

:.Faceless.: 02-03-04 02:21 PM

yo i appricate all the votes and shit and tellin why but if you gonna post vote you have to be able to poll vote also...pc

Hitta 02-03-04 06:21 PM

ok heres the break down
FLOW:camrok had a little better flow,flash u need to elevated and use more words that fall in to place better
PUNCHES:um im gunna have to go with CAM u got some deep shit on him,FLASSH work on getting more in to punches then rambiling
personals:flash uhad i dont think 1 personal on him it was wacked,camrok u had some ightt personals but need to elevate
structuer:nethier,u both need to structuer your shit alittle better.......
i hope i have helped u out in elevateing good luck next time
MY VOTE:CAMROK

Axiom 02-03-04 08:48 PM

flash is DQ'ed for being in four active battles.


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