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yo micheal...you wanna battle me....we do it with two different styles?
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CAMROK:
Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II 'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew Not a bad opener, good imagery of the WWII Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson? lol, nice punch Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white' I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight Came off a good punch, made this one look played out and weak Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded? Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted Kinda a dry humor, ok nonetheless U started this shit, and now your getting discarded Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded Ok punch, nice flow here It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes' wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes Good personal punch, good closer flash: I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit disinterested in lettin him live... Sick multi, good opener livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs.... only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib lol, nice the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin Good flow, ok punch distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill Nice wordplay, especially the first line he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its murder in the first Interesting style change, it fits, and yet it doesnt hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last? Dang, nice closer and finish Personally, I think that Flash took this with a much better approach and more creativity. This was not easy, and CAMROK, keep doin what u do, flash just brought it too hard. Vote-flash .. peace, and nice job to both, loved this one! Check this one out: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111789 |
that link i posted was one i thought as also a very tight battle.
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yo MichaelCorleone if you wanna battle i will battle you....but its gonna be a 2 style battle...to show that you got a lil bit a skill and you aint jus spittin insults...you down...hit me up in bitchslapped or pm me
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This was some mad shit, CamRok them micheal jackson lines where of tha hook.
Flow- Camrok - His flow aws brutall, Flash at parts u jumped, but was still dope Punches- Flash- Although Camrok had the good Jacko lines, Flash had more punches Wordplay-Flash, just read it and u'll see, although Camrok u were still aiight, Overall- Gotta be Flash, but this was close. |
alriht, com'n... get the votes up!! lets go! Upppin (3)
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Leave links.. I'll return favors and checkout battles. |
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yo i appricate all the votes and shit and tellin why but if you gonna post vote you have to be able to poll vote also...pc
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ok heres the break down
FLOW:camrok had a little better flow,flash u need to elevated and use more words that fall in to place better PUNCHES:um im gunna have to go with CAM u got some deep shit on him,FLASSH work on getting more in to punches then rambiling personals:flash uhad i dont think 1 personal on him it was wacked,camrok u had some ightt personals but need to elevate structuer:nethier,u both need to structuer your shit alittle better....... i hope i have helped u out in elevateing good luck next time MY VOTE:CAMROK |
flash is DQ'ed for being in four active battles.
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