RapVerse.com Community - KRAKKA T vs SDIZZLE

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Sdizzles Verse

ima Krack you over the head, have ur brains hit the floor
ur rhymes are rotten apples, un~edible and nothing at the core
( Good opener , nice flow , like the 2nd verse 8/10 )

T equals terrible, even when wut u writ is an entire script
this baby throws fits, even when his career is made of ~Bits~
( decent , little bit of a dropoff from opener , but not bad 6.5/10 )

battling me is a no~no, im surprised you werent a no~show
u've hung out with lil~jon 2 much, cuz u could be anymore low
(LOL , funnyshit dude , basic rythmes , but effective 7/10 )

s to the dizzle, listening to this guy sing to the choir
im the king of the rap boards, so bend down to ur sire
( Like it , nothing great , but the flows there and easy to read 7/10)

krakka t, why u taking shots at me, got my finga on the trigga
pop u in the head, my win will linger, so fuck u nigga

( you came good on the closer , trigga and nigga is a little overplayed but WTF 6.5/10 )

Total Score -35/50 70%

KRAKKA T'S Verse

yo im gonna treat this fool sdizzle like my mic is a pistol/
my punches destroy him like gunshots,im a take flight on ya like a missle//
( you cut out a few words , or reword this and it'll flow better IMO 6/10 )

this a war the battle wont end by just one whisle/
it'll be over when i merk ya and the mods make it official//
( Prolly your best line of battle due to good structure and flow , but thats about it ) 7.5/10
u gonna battle me with a name like sdizzle,a fake snoop dogg mann...ima merk this hizzle/<<(herb lol)ur verse will have no comeback it'll be just like rain it will just drizzle//
( same thing applys here , obviously you just spit and typed , good idea , bad presentation ) 6/10

comeon sdizzle?what were you thinkin ur gonna get sunned/
this will soon tell ya that u a herb and im number one//
( getting personal , but once again ., lacking heavy fire power ) 6.5/10

keepin ya stunned now i know the reason why ur record states ur 0 and 1/
this battle over your gonna be 0 and 2 now and this battles done krakka t won//
( Closer is kind of weak , you just used the same ending word(one) in your last bar , its repetive, and dull ) 6/10

Total Score 32/50 64 %

Yep Sdizzles takes it ..... but close .... I dont thin anything really stood out in either verse , obviously we have two novices working on their craft , And both need some work to elevate more ....

Suggestions for Krakka , try and structure your verse better , get rid of uneccesary words , flow alone is what won it for SD , no hate bro , I call it as I see it ......

Peace out , Hit my battle up with Black guy if you can

CrazyE