good shit...



what's that Avalokiteshvara in yrou sig...



and... nice joint... soon it'll be time to take it to audio...

^ It means "An embodiment of the compassion of all the buddhas,visualized in the form of a meditational deity."

This shit was ill as fuck. My fav open mic i've read since I've been here. The imagery was ill. The wording was ill. It was an incredible piece. I would quote lines but, the whole thing needs quotations. Nice shit. Keep up the good work.

This sucked!!!!!!!!!!

^^^^^Thanks......LMAO~~~

Fucking Shit. . Like Gunman Said, This Shit Was Wack. . I've Seen Better Shit From E-Thugs. . You Suck Big Nuts. . It's All About Guns, Bling, And Bitches. . Not Creativity, Dopeness, And Content. .

Who Am I Bullshittin ? Another Dope Piece Pen. .Your Storytelling Abilities Are Incredible. . Above most Heads That Post Open Mics. . Keep Droppin', For The Creative MC's Sake. . Pz.

^Hmmm~~thanks...why isn't this up for OM of the month yet???(yeah I said it I'm cocky!!!..but I'm Dope....so fuck you... :evilgrin: )

...wow a person that deserves to get
dick rode in open mic thread. good job.
this was good. structure always on key
imagery great. hope we can collab some
time...or not. but id say ur in sui.inc :P

:thumbup: ..for those who missed this.....then read ...II... :thumbup:

Well...I see you dont do them once in a while. They're just a part of your style. Nice piece...A bit harder than the 3rd installment to read but dope none-the-less. One

I get penalized by missing pieces like these in the Open Mics because I rarely stray in here. It has become too e-hardcore for me. I see that you have the other two parts up. I'll read them, as well..

"And traveled the embattled lands and their filthy scenes.
Of roasted people, laying on their backs and still screaming
Still steaming! Some on fire, long dead, but still breathing."
^^ A powerful statement all on its own....

I never read a story of someone detailing their family's burnt remains of a nuclear holocaust. Dope story nonetheless. These are the pieces I enjoy reading.