RapVerse.com Community - Wise Ways |vs| .:FreemaN:.(500 posts)

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- - Wise Ways |vs| .:FreemaN:.(500 posts) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=112132)

Yea. Ima go with Wise on this one. First of all, he killed Free in punches. I didn't really like any of Free's punches too much, and neither had great personals. I didn't think any lines completely stood out, so there's none to quote. But other than flow, Wise took this one.

V/Wise

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^^^^^^uppin this shizzy for tha 2nd time

Congratulations on finally dropping...

Never mind... At least you did... Finally...

Blah...

Uppin this #1...

Pz...

Well I'm sorry if i have a life...
I was drunk as fuck when i keyed that shit
So consider yourself lucky
Lets get some real votes i guess
#3

Again? My vote was explained idiots. Jeeze us.

I guess I'm not allowed to vote anymore or something?

Quote:

.:FreemaN:.
Fukin idiot even made an alias.. Maybe he enjoys gettin merked twice over
No skills on your behalf...
... So you'll complain in IR when this battles over
This bitch is more played than nintendo.. That really isnt a Wise Way
Just like the time you got beat...
... Not once but 2 fukin times by .:K:.
Made you put resrictions on voters.. Like you said, Youve gota be dope to vote
Fuckin stupid herb callin me out, but ya know...
... Whatever floats your boat
Id say you need to revise.. Your at school so you cant be wise
Im exposing your wackness...
... So you better start saying your goodbyes
You define the word bitch.. Never seen someone complain so much
You'll never get close to me...
... You can look but never touch
Rippin you apart in this battle.. Tearin up everythin you hold dearly
Fuck it ive enjoyed this so much...
... Im gona call out Kaos Theory[/b][/i]

Pretty good
Structure was a bit off due to writing style
Flow was pretty decent, vocab was weak
Punches were decent, personals were ok..
Wordplay was at an attempt, but failed
Rhyme Scheme was weak, pretty basic
Overall... good verse.....14/20

[quote]Wise Ways
But then I got a little wacker when I saw ya talent..& took it
Pissed off..so I socked you in tha head & left ya face crooked!
& by posting ya verse made it official..right on that very day
That every single thing is straight shit if it comes from tha UK
Are you forced to be mentally ill..or do you just do it at will?
I mean peep Free's open mics..& u'll see proof he has no skill!
Ripped by every1 else..why u think he's battling in tha spirit?
If you want tha definition of a herb..shit just look at his lyrics!
I father you kid..& I even donated money to ya charity fund
Make u Hit'Panik..after this u'll change ya name to Yu Bin SunD!
Related to queers?
Because ya punches are gay..& they sorta take after faggots
Free none of ya verses are right & he even types them in Itallics

Pretty nice too
Good flow, some usage of wordplay
A bit creative in some places... nice
Good punches, hit pretty nicely......
Personals were good.. specially finisher
Structure was good also...kept it clean
Vocabulary wasn't used much, but oh well
Overall... Dope verse.......17/20

V/Wise Ways
Simply came harder
Punches hit harder
Personals stood out

Uppin on this gayass bitch..
Who try to attempt to diss me in OM
Lmao...#4

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Ways

Uppin on this gayass bitch..
Who try to attempt to diss me in OM
Lmao...#4

Exactly the same to you...

Exceot this is number 2 for me...

^ What a bumb fucker...fuck you..
Asshole...lol...fuck you

okay here's the breakdown:

punches: i think wise takes this category, he was more creative with his shit, free had some good punches too but i think wise's shit was funnier w/better effect

personals:this came pretty close, weren't too many dope personals, this category was pretty vague so in my opinion you guys tied....both had some decent personals but nothing over the top

flow:both had pretty good flow, to different text styles but both good, i just think that wise's was easier to read, shit just went together a little bit nicer

multis:freeman, basically b/c he was the only one who really used them

creativity:wise dropped the more creative verse here, less played punches and better wordplay helped him to take this category

overall:this was a close ass battle but i think wise just edged it out

please drop an honest vote on my battle against phoenix in elevated...pz