oh and return an honest vote plz?


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...49&page=1&pp=15
and/or
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112229

^^^ ya man thanks for the vote i dont have 300 posts yet so i cant vote on yours but i will soon and i will hit it up ^^^^^^^^ Sorry about the typo's i havent battled for awhile and i was kinda in a rush heres a corrected version



Got mad skillz if your a novice i guess that makes me an advanced//
couldnt bet me if you your aol 9.0 helped you make your rhymes sound more enhanced//
its aiight tho cause we all know nobody's perfect//
i merked you bitch it wasnt just for a win its to show Respect//

Beggin for mercy yet i have no sympathy so i leave you in a trance//
take you out with the 1 2 punch cause this blackguy dont give fags like you a second chance//


I got an unfadable style and now Blackguyz comin harcore//
this shit is gonna be over faster then when the US entered the entered the second world war//

they call me Blackguy A.k.A. Terrorist bcause my shit lands direct//
the twin towers maybe gone but your next in line to get decked//

as my strap explodes u get dropped with two holes in your chest//
with that im done maybe next time you should wear a bullet proof vest//

my shit was weak but oh well hit this shit up with an honest vote

UPPING # 3 , DROP AN HONEST VOTE , I'LL GIVE YOU A FULL BREAK DOWN OF YOUR SHIT , NO PROMISES OR FAVORS THOUGH, DROP ALINK .................................................. ..........



pEACe

CrazyE

UPPING # 4 ........................... COME ON GUYS , DROP AN HONEST VOTE ........

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pEACE cRAzyE

uppin 3 __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________ hit this up and i will drop a vote on your battle asap

Punches: Black Guy, both had decent punches, black's came together better, better flow, sounded better.
Wordplay: Black, had the 1-2 punch line, not great wordplay, but it's there.
Multis: Craze, craze was straight multis, Black Guy only used 1 syllable rhymes
Personals: Neither, neither of you really knew each other sooo...
Opener:ack, opened with a good punch
Closer: Tie, I didn't get the MacBeth line, and Black's closer was weak

Vote - Black Guy

Overall better verse, more polished, Craze mad throwing mad punches anywhere, flow was off. Black, you need to flip some multis.

Return the favor in my signature

Punches: Black Guy, both had decent punches, black's came together better, better flow, sounded better.
Wordplay: Black, had the 1-2 punch line, not great wordplay, but it's there.
Multis: Craze, craze was straight multis, Black Guy only used 1 syllable rhymes
Personals: Neither, neither of you really knew each other sooo...
Opener:ack, opened with a good punch
Closer: Tie, I didn't get the MacBeth line, and Black's closer was weak

Vote - Black Guy

Overall better verse, more polished, Craze mad throwing mad punches anywhere, flow was off. Black, you need to flip some multis.

Return the favor in my signature

Never Read Shakespear Huh ?

Macbeth was a ruthless King who arranged for Several murders under the roof of his own Castle ....

MadWrath , Quick Death , Macbeth ???

I thought it was pretty easy to follow .....

Np , To each his Own ....

Peace
CE

well who cares if he had typos or misppeled words some words at least you know what they mean. CrazyE had a nice flow just that what the hell is a snapcrack? BlackGuy had a bad ass flow It, he had a pretty sweet comeback :shoot:

uppin4____________________________________________ ---------------------______________________________________----------------------------

HEY DARKY , Quit FREEPOSTING IN MY THREAD , you already said you can't vote , so stay the Fuk out of Heeeeere !!!! , You replied once , thats it !!! , Hit the Road !!!

4th of July , Snap Crack , You throw it on the ground , it goes Snap !!!

You got 3 posts in here already !!! , I need your opinions on everyvote !!!

Who the Fuk are you anyways , Black Guys - alter Ego ?? , "Darky" , WTF !!!

uppin 5 last time you foo's need to hit this up dont sleep on dis shit------------------------------

yo black guys flows sucked anyone that voted forrim is jus
a nigger nutrider
he had no flow talkin gangsta with a vest
he wouldnt know a bullet if it hittem in tha chest
typos r no biggie real niggers cant type
im not a racists i just like bein white
so in conclusion to my babblin forrum
my vote goes to crazy, jus say i suppotim

yo this vote was mad close, both of yall had a few punches, both started out strong and faded a little in the end. try to make it a little more personal and finish strong, go for the jugular. show love and vote on some of my battles (Vango vs Butcha), Vango vs Optimum, Vango vs JDC

one love peace Vango

yo i have to give it to Blackguy for his overall flow was a little tighter.