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...Àû†øpšÿ... 02-05-04 07:09 PM

This Was A EFFORTLESS Battle Niggateen Took It Easily Other Dude Didnt Even Try Niggateen took it in Every Catergory Punches,Personals/Disses,Wordplay,Vocab,Structure, Etc.............

VOTE=NIGGATEEN

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CrazyE 02-05-04 08:14 PM

Full BreakDown

Baz's Verse
Blah Blah Blah Blah, whats ur name?,/
ur giving me narcolepsy,, cos all ur shit sound the same,/

* Played Line ( Name/Same) starting with Blah Blah don't help your cause either 5/10
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, sorry about that,, shit,/
im about to Lenox Lewis ur world,, swing-and-hit,/

* Once again pretty basic , 1 full bar of your first 2 verses is ZZZZZZZ and Blah Blah , Don't work for me ... 5/10
now u out cold,, n i aint even through with this ryhme,/
count to ten,, ding,, ding,, now this battle is mine,/
* Little more Creative but nothing special 6/10

now the doctor rushes to u,, u like help me,, please,/
that nigga 187,, got me down on my knee's,/
* Please/Knees ? you need some Multi's to juice up your shit 5/10

now like mike tyson,, im ready to bite,/
games up niggateen,, its over aiight,
* Closer is Weak , Tyson and Biting is way overplayed and dull
5.5/10

26.5/50 53%

Niggateens Verse

Baz?...tell me, what the hell does that name mean?...
Beating off to Ass pics out of a Gay 'Zine?...
(LMAO - Pretty creative opener , dug it 9/10)
You see a career in the future? Well, i dont see shit...
The bottom must have fallen out like Janet Jackson's Tit...
(Nice Followup , mini personal , 8/10 )
Well "dog", this battles over, i already see the red fern...
you're passed your prime, so turn around, i think you missed the turn...
(Decent , good flow , but nothing too ill here 7/10 )
You want to elevate, but it just dont work, like toy helicopters...
You probably bite, to you good battlers are just like teliprompters...
(Nice Rythme work .......Never heard Helicopters used before 8/10)
Give it up, this is the brutal end to your little fairy tale...
your finished, go to Ebay and put your computer up for sale...
(Good Closer , nice ripping , coo 8.5/10)

40.5/50 81%

I broke it down and it looks like Niggateen wins on all cylinders , no hate to Baz ...you got decent flow , yu just got to up your gameplan a bit and try to elevate and keep your head up , and don't give up , keep trying , you'll figure it out .....

Peace to All
CrazyE

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Niggateen 02-05-04 09:41 PM

thanks for voting Uppin #1.........................

dirtyendzone 02-05-04 10:03 PM

Baz's drop was pretty good, but I think niggateen won this battle. his allusion to WHERE THE RED FERN GROWS was pretty tight. He also had good flow and flipped a lot of shit on baz, so if I could vote it would be for TEEN.

Baz187 02-06-04 06:07 AM

uppin

Niggateen 02-06-04 05:40 PM

uppin #2

ILLunatic 02-07-04 12:48 PM

Quote:
Baz187
Blah Blah Blah Blah, whats ur name?,/
ur giving me narcolepsy,, cos all ur shit sound the same,/
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, sorry about that,, shit,/
im about to Lenox Lewis ur world,, swing-and-hit,/
now u out cold,, n i aint even through with this ryhme,/
count to ten,, ding,, ding,, now this battle is mine,/
now the doctor rushes to u,, u like help me,, please,/
that nigga 187,, got me down on my knee's,/
now like mike tyson,, im ready to bite,/
games up niggateen,, its over aiight,



LMFAO
Played verse....
somewhat good structure
Punches was weak......
Personals were .. BLAH...
Flow was ok.....
But damn... need elevation
Overall......9/20



Quote:
Niggateen
Baz?...tell me, what the hell does that name mean?...
Beating off to Ass pics out of a Gay 'Zine?...
You see a career in the future? Well, i dont see shit...
The bottom must have fallen out like Janet Jackson's Tit...
Well "dog", this battles over, i already see the red fern...
you're passed your prime, so turn around, i think you missed the turn...
You want to elevate, but it just dont work, like toy helicopters...
You probably bite, to you good battlers are just like teliprompters...
Give it up, this is the brutal end to your little fairy tale...
your finished, go to Ebay and put your computer up for sale...



[size=1Decent
Punches were decent
Personals were... some what ok
Structure was better...
Flow was good... some what wordplay
Some little vocabulary
Overall......12/20

V/Niggateen
Came a lil harder[/size]




ILLunatic v.s wordplay

mad-skillz 02-07-04 01:03 PM

ima go withg ballz, i felt hgis rhyme mroe, had mroe flow and shyt

vote: ballz

ILLunatic 02-07-04 01:26 PM

^Newbie vote.....
LMFAO... Dick ryder
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Baz187 02-07-04 02:22 PM

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Niggateen 02-07-04 10:40 PM

uppin #3

Word Definate 02-07-04 11:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by mad-skillz
ima go withg ballz, i felt hgis rhyme mroe, had mroe flow and shyt

vote: ballz


fuckin moron....its BAZ...

anyways....Niggateen ripped this kid in every category...damn...no need for a break down...

Return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig

Niggateen 02-08-04 03:09 PM

uppin # 4

Niggateen 02-08-04 05:09 PM

last uppin yall, please vote.....

Tha Duce 02-12-04 10:58 PM

Nigga teen murked baz, shit was not even close, that 1st line was funny as hell nigga. and you keep the flow going with mad skillz. shit was tight dawg.

Baz was to newbeish. need to elivate big time.

Vote Nigga


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