:nono: ..read some of my other stuff..I'm Dope... :evilgrin:

Tell me again, why arn't you in legends? Anyway, this was even iller than the first. You have the best imagery on the site. The wordplay in this was ill. It was an enjoyable read. Flowed great. This is a great story coming together.

I carried my dying brother on my back, to ‘shoulder the pain’-ill wordplay

Hell always looks prettier in Christmas time-ill

The grinning-jawed Negatives of deception, false god ‘erections,’
raping and desecrating the virginity of moral insurrection…-Lmao, i had to read this line a few more times. This shit was nice.

I'm actually 'blessed' to see it all, my brother in unconscious sleep
silently being mauled, while his skin begins flaking off in sheets- Dont get much better. I could just see this in my head(but in my head i see you as that person wearing a rabit suit in your avy...weird)

Anyway, this was another ill drop. Keep up the good work.
*waits on part 3*

Ps. do you change your avy everyday, but it's the same person?

woah... did someone say legend ???No BUt i did.....lol......someone nominate it, u know ur getting net old when these kids can write way better open mics than u....Lol i wish i could write like this, i read it all and i was very very impressed it was hella dope, ur open mics get doper and doper.....Very Nice

10/10

:evilgrin: Cool~~~~but I'm already being denied for the fifth time...HOO~~~RAY~~~ :thumbup:

truthfully too much for me to get into there's no way in hell i could have the time to come up with shit of this level this was hot there's nothin more i could say but that so do ya thing gun.

uppity up~~

Hmm~~~sleepin....wake up please....^^

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wack
 

penskills ur a fuckin cum stain,u criticise every small detail of other ppls open mic's,n then u get credit for a shit rap in which u try n b 2clever,what the fuck is all that about? :cussing:

complete....dopeness....

return the favor n vote on the battle in my sig please =D

yo
 

whoa whoa whoa whoa,sum prick just replyed n it wasnt me,but it looks like me,neway,i think this rap was dope,maybe slightly 2much complicated vocab but all the same good,u got gud creative mind,keep it up,keep on goin,keep ya head up, :thumbup:

^ What was that all about??

Penskills voted illest, most consistent Open Mic'er...brilliant...all i can say for feeback is for you to check out my feedback i routinely give to your songs...always the same...Penskills the illest.