Gratsie Mr. Marvel foe switchin up your verse
and foe evryone votin Gratsie as well 2 - 0
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EVil had some good personals and had a nice starter good punches and some nice personals,the structuer was all right but needed some work in places where it feel out of line.......


MARv you neeed to elevate and work on your structuer and get better at your punches didnt see one personal and had some what of a flow but keept falling off.
evil had the catogories but not much better then u marv but had just enuff to take this in every way..........
v/EVILBOMBSQUAD

sorry about the free post but hit this battle up i need one more vote ta get the KO..so hit it up and returnt the favor thanx................*1*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112370

Good lookin on the reply
now uppin this mutha mug

yo did you vote that battle yet come on..................................

nah man ive been at work all day
3 - 0 still and uppin foe more

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