flow- wtf, his flowed better jus cus he didnt have any vocab and was real short
vocab- liver, wasn't very good, but the other guy just didnt have one "wtf" u really need ta just think of less used words and go from there to rhyme wit them it'll get u on different topics and not make u look like such a newbie, and throw sum multi's in there
punches- liver, cus he didn't bite off the other doo's
originality-liver cus wtf jus fed
multis- neither, ya'll need ta put them in so your flows are better

vote- liver bothe real weak tho work on dat shit

yo liver u said u voted for me but chu didnt up in the real thing.... do dat and anyone else get at my battle agianst tactixx drop a link and i'll return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

vote
d.liver.e
wtf? wtf
ya flo is mad basic
improve on flo and vocab
d.liver.e
won
dis one
(you need some work too d)

well just the person i wanted to c
actually, i not bovered who i beat
what the fuck...this shit is wack

you have come just on the right day
just right now i gota lot 2 say
damn hell no

u realy do think u gota chance in hell
i think ull b lucky if u cud find uve got a braincell
no it coulda been flipped but no

i bet wiv that weird name u think u rule this land
i just think u sound like a postman
so so personal but its a weak punch

if u dont no wot im sayin, n think im talkin balls
quite simply im tellin u, u no f*** all
aww thats cute...he blanked out fuck...bad punch



"What the fuck am I doin"? Stupid itz called battlin'
"what the fuck r u doin"? Guezz they call it ratlin'
its aight a so so punch

I know ya type, actin' all hard but know u can't rhyme
I lost track of time but u clearly lost track of mind
second part is aight so so

u act sweet but know sweetness doesn't survive
u only actin' wild but battlin' aint all about the mime
aint feeling this

gonna diss me now knowin' my skillz r higher ?
ur that shake titz 'n make hitz type like mariah
lmao wtf was this...hmmm....no

fear when I rhyme, I'll leave ALL u faggotz numb
your azz iz done, I juzt blew it up like a bubble gum
ahhh its aight so so punch

fuck doin' a battle, make this shit my rap anthem
my rhyme skill iz major while yourz iz juzt bantam..
its aight nothing too good

overall i gotta go with d liver

please both vote on my battles in my sig with full verse breakdown